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Chapter 1528: The Problem with the Collapse of the Plot?


"This is really what you drew" After reading the original drawings of three episodes in one breath, Erya finally took a deep breath, and when she turned her eyes to Li Yalin, she was already quite excited.

You know, Erya likes to create comics, but she likes to read comics even more.

As a nerd who escapes reality and stays away from the three-dimensional world, of course she likes the two-dimensional works best.

The comic Li Yalin handed her now was indeed a very good work, which deeply aroused her interest.

At the same time, this also made her curious, how did Li Yalin create such an interesting story in such a short period of time?

"Don't you recognize my style of painting?"

Looking at Erya with some amusement, Li Yalin knew very well that his battle this time had made a good start, at least Erya had been attracted by his comics.

So next, will Erya fall in love with the male protagonist of this comic, that is, himself?

This point still needs to be further verified.

"This is also the style of painting you are talking about.

It is indeed your patent."

After hearing what Li Yalin said, Erya also nodded.

Even though Li Yalin had only learned to draw comics for a short time, his drawing ability was very outstanding, not inferior to any professional cartoonist at all, and even better. win Should it be said that Li Yalin is very talented in this area, or is his learning ability just too incredible?

Or maybe it's both.

Erya has met many famous artists in the comics industry, and she also knows that works of this level cannot be created by ordinary cartoonists.

"sharp" After thinking of this, Erya sincerely praised Li Yalin.

This was what she was thinking in her heart.

She really admired Li Yalin.

"By the way, boy, are you ready to publish this work?"

After admiring Li Yalin, Erya thought of another question.

Now that he had painted this work, should he publish it next?

Although according to Erya's idea, this jet black bullet must be published.

"publish" Erya's statement.

But Li Yalin couldn't help but be stunned for a moment.

Although he did draw this comic, he never considered using this comic to make money.

After all, he is not short of money at all.

The reason why I created this work is actually to conquer Erya.

Whether it is published or not, it doesn't matter at all. so "I'm not going to publish it.

It's just a comic for my own entertainment."

After thinking about it in his mind, Li Yalin shook his head decisively.

He was not interested in publishing this work.

Just forget it.

"Why are you not planning to publish such an excellent work?"

Li Yalin was indeed not interested, but after hearing about his paintings, Erya couldn't sit still.

"If you don't publish this work, it will be a major regret for all comic fans."

Erya was really anxious at this time.

As a otaku who loves comics very much, she certainly hopes that more and more excellent works will be created.

But now, Li Yalin has created an excellent work.

But I want to stay in private to entertain myself.

This is simply unbearable, isn’t it?

This is absolutely selfish behavior.

It is too selfish and will never be tolerated.

"Is it that exaggerated?"

Because Erya's expression was too excited.

Li Yalin was even startled by her.

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He just said it casually.

Do you deserve to be so nervous and excited?

"This is not an exaggeration at all, okay?

In short, you must publish this work.

If you don't have a familiar magazine, I can contact the magazine where I submitted the article.

The treatment there is very good.

I will help you get it.

A good contract” "If you insist, I will entrust this matter to you."

Li Yalin really didn't expect that Erya would be willing to contact the magazine in person for this work.

This was not easy for a dead nerd.

Since Erya has already said it to this extent.

If he refused again, it might not be good, so Li Yalin didn't insist anymore, nodded, and left everything to Erya.

“Great” Seeing that Li Yalin finally agreed, Erya also looked happy.

She was so excited that a new work was coming out, and she had another masterpiece that she could appreciate.

There is nothing more joyful than this In this way, Li Yalin handed over the entrustment of Black Bullet to Erya, letting her take full responsibility.

The publication of the work, royalties, etc. were all handled by her, so there was no need for him to worry about anything.

For him, there is only one thing he needs to do now, and that is to draw the next plot with peace of mind and save more manuscripts before the work is published.

These manuscripts are not saved for emergency purposes, but to satisfy the girls around me.

After all, after reading Black Bullet, each of them became a loyal reader of this comic.

Including Erya "This child is so pitiful.

Fortunately, Yalin, you saved her."

"That founder of Senju Natsuyo is such a bastard and it's best to die as soon as possible."

"That father and daughter are so arrogant.

They killed so many people and yet they can still be so calm."

As the plot progressed, the girls also met more characters, which aroused their exclamation.

Although in terms of their strength, let alone the mere gastrea, even the strongest stage five among the gastrea is definitely no match for them.

But when reading the comics, they were actually brought into the plot, and they kept exclaiming as the plot developed, which simply made Li Yalin dumbfounded.

If they were told that everything in this comic really happened and every character in the book existed, what kind of expression would they show?

This question seems really interesting.

Well, it's okay to have it "Young man, I have a question for you."

Of course, it was impossible for Li Yalin to tell everyone the facts in a short period of time, but soon Erya came to him and asked him questions.

"What's the problem" Li Yalin looked at Erya in surprise.

Ordinary things could not arouse her interest.

The only thing that could make her take the initiative to ask questions was the two-dimensional one.

"Regarding the work "Pitch Black Bullet", don't you think the male protagonist, your ability, is too exaggerated?

That Zizi Yingyin is already perverted enough, but you are even more perverted than him.

You made such a setting, just Aren’t you afraid that the plot will collapse in the future?”

Well, Erya really brought up the issue about comics, and her question was also very in-depth.

As the protagonist in this comic, Li Yalin's performance is indeed a bit unbelievable.

In short, he is too Long Aotian.

No matter what happens, he can solve it perfectly under his operation.

Although it cannot be said that this kind of work is not good, in the long run, it will definitely affect the direction of the future plot.

If you cannot hold it back later, it will easily cause the work to collapse.

It can be said that Erya raised this question to Li Yalin because of the black bullet.

No, it is not so much a question, but a kind reminder, which will be more appropriate.

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However, in Li Yalin's view, this question left him speechless. plot collapse He has never considered this issue, because everything that happened here has been experienced by him personally, but he just hid some things, such as his identity and his system.

If I didn’t collapse, how could the plot collapse?

But Li Yalin can't say this to Er Ya for the time being.

He can't say that everything in this comic really happened.

If he does, how should he explain the world to her next?

What about the existence of doomsday?

At this moment, he really didn't know whether he should cry or laugh.

"I estimate that it will take a long time to create this jet-black bullet.

I will refine it bit by bit when the time comes."

In the end, he could only give this explanation to Erya, otherwise he would not be able to answer.

“Long time why” Li Yalin's statement made Erya very incomprehensible.

The speed of his creation these days has been obvious to all.

In just a few days, he has already drawn a plot of more than ten chapters.

This kind of speed is unprecedented in the industry. is very rare.

But now he says that he needs to spend a lot of time creating.

Isn’t this contradictory to his approach?

"The plot I created is limited, so I can draw it so fast.

I haven't thought about the plot yet, so I'll take my time."

He touched his nose in embarrassment.

Li Yalin also knew that there was something wrong with what he said, but he had never experienced any of his subsequent experiences, so how could he possibly draw them?

This is really hopeless.

"It turns out you are the type who has a sudden inspiration."

Erya actually accepted Li Yalin's explanation.

After all, this type of cartoonist was not uncommon, so she naturally classified Li Yalin under this category.

But in this case, she was more or less disappointed.

You know, most of this type of cartoonists are short-lived.

After one work becomes popular, they can no longer produce works of the same quality, and eventually disappear from the public.

This is the most regrettable thing.

"That's probably it."

Seeing Er Ya's disappointed expression, Li Yalin knew what she was thinking.

In this case, he couldn't explain anything, so he could only spread his shoulders and make an innocent expression.

But after that, his expression became serious again.

Erya asked him a question, so now, he also has questions to ask Erya.

To be continued

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