The biography of the Condor Heroes began at the end of a certain year in the first year of Ning Zongqing in the Southern Song Dynasty.After Zhongliang, who lived in seclusion in Niujia Village on the outskirts of Lin'an, Guo Xiaotian and Yang Tiexin's family suffered a catastrophe and were killed by the Southern Song Dynasty government in collusion with Wanyan Honglie, the prince of Jin, and Mrs.
Guo's wife Li Ping and Mrs.
Yang Bao Xiweak also disappeared, and the bad news came, Guo and Yang's friend Quanzhen Taoist Qiu was furious and chased and killed the murderers of Guo and Yang.He was worried about his lost friends and family, and ran around in the Lin'an area to find out to no avail; Then because he was deceived by the traitor Duan Tiande, he clashed with the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan in Jiaxing, and both were defeated.Afterwards, Qiu Chuji and the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan saw through the conspiracy of the traitors, released the soldiers and made peace, but the competition did not distinguish the winner or loser, Qiu Chuji met with the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan to find people together, and went to rescue Yang Tiexin's wife Bao Xiweak, and the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan went to rescue Guo Xiaotian's wife Li Ping, and each raised the children of the two families as adults, and reunited in Jiaxing after 18 years, and the descendants of Guo Yang competed on behalf of the winners and losers.The seven strange righteousness of Jiangnan Bo Yuntian promised with emotion.Xuan Yuemeng apprehensively handed the text he had written to Zhao Qingluo, who was still reading the outline and outline, "Take a look" He was not sure at all, the ghost knows what people in this era will think when they see the concept of martial arts novels, there are no martial arts novels in the late Qing Dynasty, even if there is a little budding style, it is by no means a very pure martial arts novel like Xuan Yuemeng.Zhao Qingluo curled her lips, "I can't understand your outline, the detailed outline or something, that is, you can understand it, look at your word, no wonder people have objections to your qualifications for the government exam, this word is far worse than your eldest brother." ”Xuan Yuemeng was greatly discouraged, and said that what did Xuan Yuelei do, and he was slightly jealous in his heart, "I write this casually, as long as you understand it, what do you do when you write so well" Zhao Qingluo said seriously: "You must not think so when you write, every word, no matter what time it is, you must write it seriously, otherwise when you want to write well, you can't write well." ”Xuan Yuemeng nodded, "I know, Mr.
Zhao, no matter when I write in the future, I will write one stroke at a time, take it seriously, okay, you hurry up and read my text first" Zhao Qingluo rolled her eyes, took over Xuan Yuemeng's manuscript, and frowned at the beginning, "This is a novel, what the hell, vigorously can write this kind of thing, how do you write it is the same as we usually talk, why are there so many small things in the middle, what are these" Xuan Yuemeng sweated and explained: "These are punctuation marks, There is no punctuation, how hard it looks to look "In fact, there were already punctuation marks in the Tongzhi years, and the source was in Europe.After the Opium War, new ideas were introduced, and Western punctuation also followed.In ancient Chinese texts, punctuation marks are generally not added, but sentences are broken through the sense of language, mood particles, grammatical structures, etc., and the full stop indicates the end of the sentence; The tonal sign looks like the current ton, indicating a pause in tone, which often leads to ambiguity and misunderstanding of the words of the article.There was no universal punctuation in ancient Chinese, and it began to be used in the 19th century." ”as a break sentence.In fact, punctuation marks have existed in China since the pre-Qin period, which can be seen in archaeological artifacts from the 20th century onwards, but there is no uniform standard for these symbols.For example, in the bamboo slips of the Warring States period, you can see the "└" type symbol, which usually indicates the end of an article; Another example is the function of "▄", which is a combination of modern commas and periods, which are used to indicate broken sentences.In the records of the ancients, He Ji Chuan of the Song Dynasty praised He Ji: "All the books read are punctuated."
Righteousness is self-evident, and there is self-seeing without waiting for arguments. ”In fact, as far back as the era of oracle bone inscriptions and bronze inscriptions, there was already a rather peculiar punctuation in China.Qing Zhang Xuecheng Bingchen's notes verified: "The method of dotting sentences has existed before the Han Dynasty. ”Zengyun Yun: "All sentences are absolutely dotted next to the words, and the reading points are slightly dotted between the words." ”Xu Shen of the Han Dynasty included punctuation marks in the interpretation of words, and received the "number", explaining: "There is an end, and there is also knowledge." ”also received the "" number, explaining: "Hook recognition also." ”Qing Duanyu remarked: "Those who recognize the hook use the hook to recognize their place."
Today's people have a hook in reading, that is. ”So ancient China just didn't have modern punctuation, not no punctuation.Xuan Yuemeng didn't know these things, and he didn't even know that he had unknowingly had an impact on world culture, he just wrote novels according to his own language habits, and he still needed Zhao Qingluo to help him revise it.Zhao Qingluo nodded and commented softly: "These punctuation marks are very good, I just understood it the first time I read it, with these punctuation marks, the sentences are much more vivid, and you can annotate them at the beginning of the novel."
I believe that those who watch it can accept it.Although what you wrote is a little crude, it is quite comfortable to look at, and it is not a matter of brains. ”Xuan Yuemeng was pleasantly surprised that Zhao Qingluo could accept her sentence structure, and said with a smile: "Yes, then you hurry up and see what I wrote, do you have any questions, do you like it?"
briefly discussed the use of punctuation, Zhao Qingluo continued to read, and the eyebrows stretched out, although Xuan Yuemeng wrote very white, as if she was talking normally, but there was a charm mixed in it, which made people feel very good to read, the content of the whole chapter was easy to understand, the thinking was clear, and it made people feel comfortable and relaxed when reading.Zhao Qingluo looked at Xuan Yuemeng in surprise: "This is what you wrote, what are you holding in your head, you are really a prodigy" Xuan Yuemeng said triumphantly: "Did you know that you fell in love with me" Zhao Qingluo's face turned red, and she continued to widen her eyes, and read the chapter written by Xuan Yuemeng again, and she didn't bother to argue with Xuan Yuemeng.Zhao Qingluo: "I can help you change it, you can write another chapter to show me the Guo family and the Yang family, what happened later, did Qiu Chuji save their wife Guo Xiaotian died, so is Yang Tiexin dead" Xuan Yuemeng listened triumphantly to Zhao Qingluo asked this and that, knowing that she had already entered the play, and said with a smile: "Yes, you let me kiss it, and I will tell you." ”Zhao Qingluo pinched Xuan Yuemeng's fleshy ears with two fingers, "Let you talk nonsense again." ”But as he spoke, he kissed Xuan Yuemeng's chubby face, "Well, can you tell me now" Xuan Yuemeng sweated, I want to kiss you, not let you kiss me, "What's the use of this, you're cool now, I'm not cool" Zhao Qingluo heard the word cool, her face turned red, and she glanced at Xuan Yuemeng, "Don't talk about pulling down, stingy." ”Because Xuan Yuemeng's writing was laborious and the person was still too young, he asked the maid to hurry up to the foreign bank to find a gentleman who was in charge of the accounts, and he dictated it, and the person recorded it on the side, and the account clerk was also stunned when he saw that the young master Meng could actually create a novel without a pause.In this way, after Mr.
Bookkeeper's account, and then by Zhao Qingluo's rhetoric, Xuan Yuemeng actually completed a manuscript of more than 40,000 words in one afternoon Although Xuan Yuemeng gave himself a certain confidence in Zhao Qingluo's performance, even girls in this era love to read it, but he is not overly optimistic, because Zhao Qingluo cannot represent the main consumer force of this era, and the main consumer force must be a literate rich man, he dare not guarantee that people like Xuan Hongtao and Zeng Jize will love to read it anyway.As for Xuan Yuewen and Xuan Yuewu, he is not sure, Xuan Yuelei doesn't have to think about these people are the main consumers, they can buy, they can understand, but one of the four people is not sure, it should be said that one of the five people is not sure, such as Wang Zhankui and Dali, Dazhi, Da Niu They must love to watch, but Wang Zhankui They only know how many words Ah to occupy the newspaper industry by serializing novels, Xuan Yuemeng is not sure, but there is only this way, he can't think of other ways for the time being.In the process of creation, Xuan Yuemeng is not blindly copying Lao Jin's things, he sympathizes with Yang Kang, and Yang Kang used to be just a face-painted character in the Legend of the Condor Heroes, but everyone was too impressed by the 83 version of the Condor Heroes, so they felt that Yang Kang was flesh and blood, in fact, the role of Yang Kang in the original book The number of appearances in the Legend of the Condor Heroes is extremely limited.Xuan Yuemeng increased the drama of Yang Kang and Mu Nianci, and also increased the drama of Princess Huazheng, so that Princess Huazheng worshipped the Golden Wheel Dharma King as a teacher, and got the Golden Wheel Dharma King out in advance.Lao Jin must not have prepared to write a sequel to the Condor Heroes when he created the original book The Legend of the Condor Heroes, so some places to ambush the pen, Xuan Yuemeng also arranged some small stories in advance, plus the number of words he wrote about Aishui, and he added some personal favorite passages, in this way, one million words, forty times the Legend of the Condor Heroes, in Xuan Yuemeng's new outline, has increased to two hundred times a full five times Xuan Yuemeng only took two days to complete the outline of the entire Legend of the Condor Heroes, on the third day, Zhao Qingluo also put the first chapter of the reworded Legend of the Condor Heroes in front of Xuan Yuemeng.Xuan Yuemeng took a closer look and said in surprise: "The writing is great, better than Lao Jin's writing" Zhao Qingluo wondered: "Who is Lao Jin" Xuan Yuemeng smiled, "It's a not very famous author in the previous dynasty, you don't care, hurry up and let people take it to send it to contact the novelist, how about it" Zhao Qingluo nodded, "Dali just came back and said that more than a hundred semicolons have been dispatched, and the things that we are going to do essays and sign contracts with novelists have been sent out, and the response is good, There are already more than a dozen novelists who want to cooperate with us, and if there is money to be made, who will not make money, and those who write books are very poor. ”Xuan Yuemeng smiled and nodded, "Yes, this is a good thing, it can not only enliven the literary world, but also increase the income of novelists, and it will definitely be beneficial to the cultural cause of the Qing Dynasty Let's go to the manuscript, let's start and let everyone see it" Zhao Qingluo glanced at Xuan Yuemeng, "Wait until it's done, it's not going to be done, just what's the matter, it's still a child in the end." ”Xuan Yuemeng, uh t1706231537: