Where there is a beginning, there will be an end.The first work of "Holt" was really written at the beginning of the brain.And then it went on like this, looking back at my humble outline at the time, it was really biased towards my grandmother's house.Every time I hit the keyboard for such a long time, it was as if I had really seen these, these people, the development of things.I can't help but write it down like that, hahaha....
Every time I think about this, I want to laugh.This is not the end, just the beginning.I have just touched the threshold, and I haven't officially crossed it yet, but I will, from that day.That day will not be too late.In fact, for a while, I like to look for the same as me, but the finished book, I want to see their testimonials, I want to know something.But there are few books that have continued in this way with a testimonial.What I want to know more is the reason, so the reason.If there are people like me, then after you have read the above words, I will summarize a little bit for you, which belongs to personal opinions.Of course, it's mainly written for me to read later, or to read in a few days, and the new book will be released soon.Let's go.First: the title of the book.A lot of people's first reaction when they see the title of my book is probably that trilogy.,At that time, I also wanted to write that kind of Middle-earth fandom.,It's okay at first.,Then I suddenly realized that something was wrong and changed it temporarily.。
As a result, selling dog meat on the head of a sheep is really enough for me to smile bitterly for a while.The title of the book determines the content, because the first thing a reader sees should probably be the title of the book.Remember, remember.Second: Update.Recently, I've been chasing eagles and eating chickens.The speed and level of the codeword, I really never thought about it, I see it in the readership group every day, in Zhihu, and in the comments - tentacle monster (praise).It's very good-looking, sometimes too humble, and when I see his testimonials on the shelf, I instantly want to cry without tears.Don't mention it, if you want to know, subscribe to the big book.Back here, six thousand words a day is the most basic (except for the great talents, of course) and it is best to be about eight thousand words, which is still the answer of the elbow god.Here I reflect on myself, my half-dead renewal.Anyway, I tried it in the last few days, and it was about 2,700 words an hour, as long as my mental state was better, it would be faster.But in fact, it is still necessary to do this in the case of a bad mental state, which is the basic quality of online writers.I will definitely pay attention to the next book, and it must be maintained according to this standard after it is put on the shelves.Responsible for the reader, responsible for the time Third: outline.I just read a book, and it turned out that the book was said back and forth that it was too messy, the plot.My book is almost messy, probably from the time when Luo Haoxuan and Sorin explained the identity cycle, the previous part....
The hodgepodge is a bit and messy.It's best to recall yesterday's content when you write in the morning, after all, the outline at the beginning can't stick to the end.The toad god said that every morning he would directly outline what he was going to write today, and then start writing.It's not easy to get bugs this way, and the characters won't forget it, which is good.Fourth: CharactersMy book was originally intended to have Tal as the main character, so it felt a bit unclear to read at first, and it was decided to change it to Thorin after a few chapters.Because Tal is too weak to be the protagonist.Anyway, I shouldn't have much way to write the history of a guy who abandoned his companions and ran away alone, and I didn't have that ability at the time.Now it seems that it was the right decision.And then the back walked up to count it as a double master....
Spray lightly, spray lightly.Now I still feel that Luo Haoxuan and Solin are too similar, except for the difference in concepts.In fact, Luo Haoxuan is also an unexpected character who has a whim and wants to expand and sublimate his world view instantly, but I like Luo Haoxuan a lot.Fifth: The power system, if you have read my book, even if you don't subscribe to it, turn to the front.Goldfinger was revealed too late, and when the identity of the Blood Demon actually became Goldfinger, it was far, far away from the beginning, so far that readers might not be in the mood to read it.And there is no power system in this book, so it is estimated that if many people read it in the future, they will definitely be puzzled.Who is stronger this Thorin or Tár?
What kind of strength is Parr?
What about Grey Bay?
All the way to the back, none.Some people may even think that this author is talking nonsense when they see that Rossi used his identity power to kill Kubiak in one fell swoop at the end.Misstep, misstep.I haven't reached the level where you can control the rhythm of power without a power system, like Kubiak then and now, and Milayeraru.Sixth: The characters deal with the villains several times and run away, some are plotted (Kubiak), some are beaten away (Nejiga) They live really long, from the beginning to the end (that's right, Sir Kubiak!).
）The rhythm is still too immature, and this rhythm is probably when the protagonist should make a move and when he won't.When will the villain die, when will he escape.It should be considered more from the reader's point of view.—————————— is over here, and the rest is considered to be controversial when I say it, and I don't want to see people here take these controversies as rules, so I will see for myself, and then I will change it myself.The next book is about to be released, and a single chapter will be issued when the time comes (it is estimated that it will be these days) to strive for the next book to have a good score!
—————————— part of the chronicle of this bookNote: Only important times and turning points are recorded to create captive people in the first year of existence, and there is no evidence to indicate whether existence is conscious1 year—Captives were created by existence for 20,000 years—The first generation of identities appeared as Blood Fiends and Glazed Wings, with the aim of erasing captives for 750,000 years—Glasswing envoys gained captive power, but used their power to create new worlds1209 millennium— Existence created eighty demon gods similar to those with identities 2043 thousand years - in the end, the demon god became a captive person, and did not erase 2890 thousand years - existence created twelve races, these are the initial races of countless world creatures in the later 39.05 million years - in the end, the demon god will kill all the latecomers who challenge him, and the captive people still belong to him for 44.48 million years - in the end, in order to prevent there are still challengers, the demon god uses the power of captive people to create countless worlds and open up space for 90.29 million years - the first space fragmentation, There is induction for 178.92 million years - the second space is broken, there is induction, and the initial form of magic power appears, gradually unifying 2000800000 years - finally the demon god directly kills most of the living beings for 833482 10,000 years - the power transformer of captive people appears, and the power of eternal sleep is removed, and finally the demon god has always been awake for 833484 10,000 years - in the end, the demon god committed suicide in order to get rid of the power of this captive person, and the captive person was vacant for 903232 10,000 years- Captives become identity forces suddenly appear for 1000032 10,000 years - gradually stabilized, identity people have appeared in large numbers for 2322324 10,000 years - the day all the chaos ends, the wall of the world appears for 43543535 10,000 years - captives are eliminated Next, the chronicles of Luo Haoxuan and Solin are the first year of Luo Haoxuan's birth, 1 year - Luo Haoxuan was born, and the normal lifespan of the race to which he belongs is about 125 years old and 8 years - he was caught, his parents became identity awakening materials, and he was forcibly manipulated by the beast pupil, Killed his parents with his own hands, only his sister lived for 8 years—The previous generation of Blood Demons sent her to the temple for 23 years—Killed the previous generation of Blood Demons, and completed the cycle23 years—Thorin was born, and the normal lifespan of the Holts of his race was about 300 years31 years—Pal came to the Holt village and met Tal and Thorin34 years—Luo Haoxuan became the sharpest sword in the temple35 years—The Holt village was plotted by the Church and used to guide the demons, and the Kubiak Lord was the 37th year—Leaving Parr's protection, Traveling to various parts of the world to experience, Tal followed for 39 years - Luo Haoxuan solved the Senluo Temple for 40 years - was targeted by Milai Yelalu and pulled into the so-called justice, Tal had a conflict with it, and left to go there, 41 years - met Haitiana, fell in love for 43 years - Milai Yelalu bewitched him to improve his strength, and connected with Haitiana's identity for 45 years - Sorin transformed a world into flesh and blood power 45 years - Luo Haoxuan met Yan 46 years - Sorin will transform a world again, Then it intensified for 47 years - the first time he entered the world transformed into flesh and blood power, and realized his mistake 47 years - he had a conflict with Milai Yelaru and wanted to escape, Haitiana couldn't bear the guilt and committed suicide for 51 years - Luo Haoxuan met Lin Lan for 54 years - he was calculated by Aite, and Lin Lan died for 61 years because he wanted to save Luo Haoxuan - Thorin joined the Za Ling Kingdom, and was an executioner for balancing blood magic for 75 years - Za Ling Kingdom discovered a pagan religion, and was a disciple of the old god Suluk for 78 years - Strangling the Sulukists, failure, and the fall of the entire kingdom for 78 years—Thorin met Lydarin for 81 years—Thorin was unwilling to put Lydarin in danger, because he had found traces of the old gods of the past, and said goodbye for 81 years—Thorin reached the heart of the earth and was shocked by the power of the old gods90 years—Thorin joined the Kaka for 103 years—Luo Haoxuan discovered the traces of the Nasya's space creations143 years—Aite triggered the Nasya's space creations, and Luo Haoxuan chased and killed them for 143 years— Thereka was destroyed by the creation of Nasya's space, re-found Par, asked for help, Thorin met Lydarin again143 years - Luo Haoxuan arrived in Thorin's world144 years - Thorin and Luo Haoxuan met 145 years - killed the old god Li Dakra, whose spirit was the key to mastering blood magic in the later stage of Thorin146 years - Thorin fell into crisis, arrived in the Monster Plains to hunt Shengqi 146 years - arrived at the world of Linggu, Luo Haoxuan and Lei Yakai met for 146 years - Luo Haoxuan barely eased the approach of Kubiak, Thorin faced the threat of Nejiga, obtained the World Fragment, and united with the Nomeran Academy of Magic and Magic for 147 years - Aite was defeated for 148 years - there was a revival of the card for 150 years - the temple descended, joined the temple for 151 years - was ambushed by the Messenger of Time, left the temple and went to the world of Yuqing, the modern urban world for 152 years - returned to the temple, and already understood how to face it, met Wang Yue, and knew that the Heavenly Gate was 153 years - entered the Enlightenment Sanctuary for 153 years - Become a captive and use your power to end the cycle ()