Wang Hao couldn't help but look at Ning Luo's excited little face, and said in his heart, just you, a wild girl in the countryside, have never even entered the door of the academy, and you can even write a novel, then what he writes is rubbish."
You, you have such a big heart, even a person like you who hasn't read many books can write novels.Do you want your brother to give you a palm?
”"Okay, can you help me take a look at this story and see if I can read it?"
Ning Luo deliberately said with an innocent look.In fact, she wanted to see how he reacted to this story, and if the great talents could be attracted by her story, maybe they could really sell it for a good price.It's a pity that she didn't have much time in the past two days and didn't write much, and she still wrote a condensed version.In the past, Ning Luo was a fan of Jin Yong, and some people used the first word of each of his books to connect them into a smooth mouth."
Fly, snow, even, sky, shoot, white, deer.Laughter, books, gods, chivalry, leaning, bi, mandarin ducks. ”Ning Luo's favorite is the old man Jin's condor, Yitian and the Condor.The Condor has watched it no less than five times, and every time she watches it, she is fascinated, so she can recite the storyline in it.However, the whole novel is a bit long, and if she writes it one by one, she doesn't know when she will write it, so this time she made it up a little bit by herself, and some small plots were not written.Originally, in the first chapter, she remembered that there were thousands of words, but she directly reduced it to about 2,000 words.The second chapter, the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan, is currently half the word count.However, just a few thin pages were enough to make Wang Hao breathe rapidly and his eyes dilated.After reading the novel for a long time, his brain is still clouded, is this really written by her?
How is this possible."
Brother Wang Hao, what's the matter, can you see it?"
Wang Hao was pulled back to his senses by Ning Luo's voice, and said after a long time: "You can't write a little bit, you wrote so many words, the protagonist came out, according to the preferences of those readers, the protagonist should grow up at the beginning." ”Ning Luo didn't expect that Wang Hao also had a bit of vision, so he said, "Then what should I do?"
I was thinking of taking it to the bookstore to see if I could sell it for money. ”"No, you can't write like that."
Wang Hao looked impatient.After a pause, he said, "Otherwise, I'll help you change it, and I'll go back to the investment in two days, I'm a little familiar with the shopkeeper, and I'll help you take it to sell when the time comes." ”"That's it, okay, then there is Brother Lao Wanghao.""
But you have to tell me about the storyline later, so I can see how I can help you revise it."
Ning Luo didn't expect Wang Hao to make such a request, but thinking that he was so kind to help himself, it might be better if he had his talented pen.So he said without thinking, "Okay, then I'll tell you about it." ”She said it roughly, but it was more general, and it was like this, which also made Wang Hao's mouth unclosing, and his hands trembled slightly with excitement.For fear that Ning Luo would see his abnormality, he covered his hand slightly with his sleeve, and then quickly sent her away.After Ning Luo left the house, Wang Hao locked himself in the house all day, in order to write the story that Ning Luo told as soon as possible.He was so excited, he was almost crazy.What kind of brain is this, to think of such a good story, on the other hand, the book he wrote himself, it is simply garbage in the garbage, not worth mentioning.After Ning Luo came out of the Ning family, she didn't find nothing, and she also got a very important piece of information, which was simply life-saving information for her.That is, the Meng family will celebrate Mrs.
Meng's birthday soon, and now their kitchen is looking for someone to help, if she can get in, won't she be able to see her sister.So after Ning Luo bought some vegetables and went back, he thought about how to get to Meng's house.She also learned that Old Man Meng has three grandchildren, a nephew and a granddaughter.The eldest grandson, Meng Tianzhan, was born to Mrs.
Dafang, and it is said that he is a deep man and has a lot of means to do things.Meng Tian, who is in the second room, heard that he is his stepson, and he is low-key and cold.For Meng Tianze, Wang Hao doesn't know much information.Meng Tianfang, who knows the most, is a wanderer, and his style of action is a little perverse.Now Ning Luo wants to go to the Meng family in the town to help, and he can't say that he has to ask Li Zheng for help.After all, Li Zheng is the only decent person who can talk to people outside in their Ningjia Village, no matter whether it can be done or not, she has to try.At first, Li Zheng still looked a little difficult, but after Ning Luo begged him repeatedly, he said that he would go to the town for a trip, and whether the thing could be done or not depended on her luck.Ning Luo thanked him repeatedly, waited for the good news from Li Zheng, and after he went back, he bought some meat by the way.In order to cook a few more dishes and reward Uncle Chen, Ning Luo took Ning Xiang to cook some wild vegetables outside.The two sisters and brothers picked some wild vegetables, and Ning Luo also dug up a few pieces of wild ginger in the soil.Wild ginger, also known as artichoke, is used to marinate and eat, and the taste is quite good.However, Ning Luo has never tried it for cooking or the like.Walking halfway up, passing by a large lake, it seemed that there were swimming fish under the water, Ning Luo looked at Ning Xiangxiang's thin arms and legs, and wanted to get a few fish and make some fish soup to replenish his body.From now on, Ning Luo will plan for his younger brother's future, and the first thing to do is to strengthen his body and gain the ability to protect himself.Otherwise, you will be bullied when you go there.So she went to the wild bamboo forest on a whim, cut a bamboo with a machete, and asked Ning to think about going back to get a fishing line and a hook, and made a fishing rod temporarily.Ning Luo knew that the story of "lying on the ice and begging for carp" was a bit exaggerated, but fishing in winter was not an uncommon thing, as long as the bait was done well, those fish who had been hungry for a few days would definitely be hooked.However, what she didn't expect was that the moment she put the bait into the water, something strange happened, only to see a "crackling" sound suddenly from the originally frozen ice, and she didn't see what was happening.I heard Ning think about it and shouted in surprise: "Third sister, wow, there are so many fish, look at those fish have come over." ”Isn't it, Ning Luo only felt that the fishing rod under her hand was desperately pulling down as if she had committed a sheep's madness, and then she saw the fish one by one, and she circled around her bait.Wow, so many fish to bite the hook, is this crazy?
However, the opportunity could not be missed, Ning Luo suddenly asked Xiang Xiang to hand the bamboo basket directly to her, she used a big stone to smash the ice surface larger, and suddenly the bamboo basket could go directly into the water to go fish.I've never tried to catch fish so coolly, I saw those fish right under her nose, just scoop it, it's a basket, big and small fish.Some weigh one or two pounds, and some weigh three or four pounds.Ning Luo was a little scared in the back, these fish were not stunned.After more than a dozen catties, she took back the bamboo basket and picked up the fishing rod.However, as soon as the rod was picked up, the fish slowly dissipated, as if someone was driving them away.This situation is really weird, Ning Luo hurriedly went to ask Xiao Wu, and only later did she know that she had used the relationship of Lingshi Water.Although there is not much spiritual power in the spirit stone water, it has a fatal attraction for young fish.