In the private restaurant, there was no hot food on the cold dishes, and a small half table was placed, and the liquor was a two-pot head, and the three of them just drank a glass of Lao Chen next door and sprayed it, and their expressions were also shocked.
Because when clinking glasses, Tang Zhun said that thanks to the help of the stars since writing the book, he should pay tribute to him for this glass of wine. …… "You guy almost sprayed on the table, how are we going to eat?!"
Lao Chen next door was shocked, and his face collapsed.
"It's okay, it's all my fault, I'll invite you for dinner at night, and after eating, please Wenda for your big health care, big health care?!"
Lao Chen next door looked embarrassed, and his expression became obscene as he spoke.
"Stop, forget about the big health care, let's eat and drink well."
"Wenda, aren't you, you're not a child, are you?
You must know that you are a super second generation in my heart, and you should spend too much money and too many cattle than us, and I still want to meet you.
Next door, Lao Chen stared at him again.
This time it was Starry Sky who laughed and scolded, "You think everyone is the same as you?"
You have a daughter-in-law and you are not afraid of retribution if you are so prodigal, Wenda don't pay attention to him, this guy is so obscene. ” Tang Zhun didn't agree with this topic, and said with a smile, "Before I wrote a joke book for the first time, I was a pure novice, if it wasn't for the starry sky to introduce me to the main points of the online article, and took the initiative to help me revise the manuscript and give a clear goal, I wouldn't be where I am today, those words just now are not true." ” Lao Chen next door was stunned again.
After staying for a few seconds, he smiled and said, "Wenda, you are looking for me, you see that we are fellow countrymen, we all live in Jiangxia, what do you want to know, I know everything, I am much more powerful than the starry sky." ” Tang Zhun glanced at the other party with a smile again, and then asked about the aspects that he couldn't achieve for the time being.
He joked that there are too many bugs in this book, strictly speaking, the revised manuscript is attractive, but the main thing is that the atmosphere of the old days is well described, which is enough for readers to feel and be attracted by that atmosphere when they read it.
The second is that Starry Sky has pointed out several times before how to write cool essays in urban essays.
But the skills of rejuvenating the starry sky also have a lot of shortcomings, he is a small high dynasty after a small high dynasty, there is no connection between the front and back, the reader is very cool to watch it for the first time, and the number of times is tired, the main line is scattered, and the explosive stamina is very insufficient.
Because of the obvious shortcomings, the book of the starry sky will last for a few years, and there are still 24 single chapters of less than 1,000, and the average is only 2,000.
Tang Zhun learned from the other party's advantages, but there were still many shortcomings.
Those are the starry sky will not be, can not be written.
When he said his doubts, he was also happy with the starry sky, "Wenda, you are right, my biggest deficiency is coherence and overall structure. ” "But it's right to call Lao Chen today, this kid's short-term coolness is far inferior to mine, but the overall structure of the overall structure is too much more than me, he can write two or three hundred thousand words for a big plot, and a little bit of anticipation attracts readers, and the reading stickiness is much stronger than mine."
The old Chen Hu next door looked at the starry sky suspiciously, and then looked at Tang Zhun, both touched his chin a little uncertainly, and said with a smile after a minute or two, "You tease me?"
” “……” Tang Zhun made it clear that he wasn't teasing him, and Lao Chen next door slapped his thigh, "I'll rub it, I'm hitting the street like this, Wenda, you ask me for advice, I'll drink a glass of wine and calm down." ” In the online literature circle, the class is far less obvious than other industries, such as a certain industry, with an annual income of one million and two or three hundred thousand, which is basically the difference between the general manager of a province and the manager of a city of a large enterprise.
Between authors, the gap is far less pronounced.
Even so, when you sit in front of the other party when the gap between your income and the other party is too large, you will instinctively feel weak to speak.
Who is Lao Chen next door?
The average of 4,000 is about equal to 70 or 80 yuan of 1,000 words.
What about Tang Zhun?
The average is more than 10,000, and it is still growing, which is about 200 words per 1,000, not to mention that Tang Zhun has earned a lot of reward since he wrote the book.
At present, the first-class writers who have just been promoted across the country ask him for advice?
Lao Chen next door thought that the other party was teasing him for the first time, but it seemed that he was not completely excited.
After drinking two glasses of wine in a row to calm down, Lao Chen next door laughed, "Wenda, I put more than 100 catties here today, what do you want to ask, just say, I know everything." ” He was telling the truth, just like when he was in the starry sky.
Wen Yidao sincerely asked him for advice from this little street?
That vanity is so satisfying.
In the excitement, Lao Chen next door did not spare his hand, and unconsciously explained to Tang Zhun his writing experience, skills, etc.
"Wenda, your book, the most amazing thing is the pen power, rendering power, not to mention it at the beginning, now after three or four hundred thousand words, it is not worse than the average traditional writer, but the main line is indeed not so clear."
"A big main line of the protagonist's struggle, running through a book, but also a small goal at each stage, this small goal should not explode so fast, the biggest problem in the starry sky is that it explodes too fast, you can write two or three hundred thousand words, he bursts out with 20,000 words, and when you change a small goal, you will be tired of reading if you change frequently, and the sense of expectation and adhesion is indeed poor......"
Each author has their own style and has their own way of doing it.
Lao Chen said a lot later, the more he said, the more detailed he became, and he also picked up some plot examples of Tang Zhun's joke book, which was to explain that if he wrote it, a certain paragraph of Xiao Gao Dynasty would not break out so quickly, and many skills were added in the middle to assist, digging holes in advance for the later plots, and accurately creating new directions and so on. is Tang Zhun, an observer, even if he listens carefully and listens too much, he still gradually produces various vague feelings, which is that his talent in this area is not strong.
When you learn the memory in your mind, it is already in your own mind, and it is much easier to imitate and learn through a thin film than to learn it from scratch.
So he made rapid progress, and when he learned to look at the starry sky, the other party spoke a small explosion of one or two thousand words, not only in words but also in person to modify the sample, that way is clear at a glance, clear and unambiguous, and easier to learn.
Lao Chen's here is a large framework of hundreds of thousands of words, there are no examples, and Tang Zhun has not tried it, so it is normal to accept and understand it in a short time.
When Lao Chen's mouth frothed and he poured a bottle of mineral water, Tang Zhun got up and filled a glass of wine to the other party, "Although there is no apprenticeship ceremony, you two have really taught me a lot of things, Lao Chen, I have to take the time to study your skills and abilities, come, I will give you a glass first." ” "Don't, don't scare me, Ha, I can have a chance to talk to you about this, that satisfaction is worth everything."
Lao Chen was also a little frightened, what kind of apprenticeship ceremony are you talking about?
He understands a lot of things he says, even the editors understand it, and a great god like you doesn't say such things to him to stimulate his little heart.
However, it was also at this time that Lao Chen next door confirmed that Tang Zhun, a new god who was already rising rapidly, had a really good personality, and he didn't have a little swagger, which was too different from the cold god he imagined.