(PS: Thank you for the reward, I have to have a small explosion today.) ） When Lin Kaizhong looked at Tan Yaowei and the others in a daze, Tang Zhun in the East Garden of Wanhe Jiacheng also stretched out happily, and made a series of crisp finger joints with a clenched fist, "It's done?"
It's so fast, more than 90,000 words are written in this way. ” More than 90,000 words in an online article is definitely a small beginning, compared to books that are often millions or exaggerated to tens of millions of words, the mini ones can't be mini, but for the [Jiang Xia Past] adapted from Lin Kaizhong's deeds, it's finished. is also said, in online novels, it is normal to write a plot in 90,000 words.
Especially in this story, there is not so much water, and the content is very concise.
After being delighted, Tang Zhun went out for breakfast and came back to continue his review, not only checking for typos, but also including various modifications, whether it was the words or sentences, or some places that were found inappropriate, they were all modified.
He was busy until noon, and he changed it more than ten times.
Then Tang Zhun contacted Zhao Zhiyuan on the Internet, wanting to ask this old author in traditional literature to help him check and see how the hard work of these two nights and one morning was.
Zhao Zhiyuan met at Lao Chen's birthday party next door last time, and the other party wrote online articles on the street, but he has been rolling in the traditional world for ten years, and he is still a member of the Provincial Writers Association who graduated from the Department of Literature, and he treats Tang Zhun very well at the party.
It's not hard. ………… "Tang Zhun?
I've finished reading it, this 90,000-word novella is your test of entering the traditional world?
Last time, I heard Lao Chen say that you bought so many information books and wanted to try the tradition, I thought you were joking, but I didn't expect that it was only about half a month, and you came out. ” A few hours later, Zhao Zhiyuan's Penguin lit up, and his words back made Tang Zhun speechless.
"Brother Zhao, I want to ask you to check it, don't be so polite, right?
It's not the first time we've met, how is this book written, do you give your opinion?
Approve it, or I wouldn't be looking for you. ” Speechless, he replied to Zhao Zhiyuan, and he also re-typed after a pause for a few minutes.
"Okay, then you're welcome."
"What do you say about this book?
,I'm convinced.,The content is a bit exaggerated.,The male protagonist is too miserable.,But your pen is very strong.,The style is also strong.,In such a cruel and depressing reality, the male protagonist has always been so optimistic and cheerful.,I frowned and depressed when I saw such a tragic event.,Psychologically panicked.,But the male protagonist's optimistic sunshine really touched me.。
"And that kind of father-son warmth?
Especially this paragraph is so good, Lin Kaizhong gave his son his sixth birthday, and I cried there. ” …… There are a lot of artistic adaptations in Jiangxia's past.
Lin Kaizhong was 29 years old, his son was four years old, and when he was about to get better, he was already in his early 31s, his family was surrounded by foreign debts, and the pressure was too great, and his legs were not good to walk.
As a result, the son didn't eat a big meal, and told his father in a panic and fear that he got the third lowest in the class in the exam?!
Lin Kaizhong was furious and reprimanded him fiercely, because there was no refrigerator or anything at home in the summer, and after the training, he let his son have a big meal, but the little guy ran out crying and said that he was going to find his grandfather and ignored him.
Lin Kaizhong walked badly and didn't catch up, limped slowly with a big meal, and just heard the cheerful laughter inside outside his parents' small courtyard.
That was Lin Kaizhong's father questioning the little guy who had clearly taken the third exam in the class, why did he lie to Lin Kaizhong and say that he was third from the bottom?
The little guy said proudly that he could let his father stay at home alone for a big meal, he had lost a lot of weight recently, and then Lin Kaizhong cried silently outside the yard carrying the big meal.
This episode is not a true deed, the other party didn't talk so much when Tang Zhun inquired, and he didn't say much about his family, he only said that when he was young, his parents were also bankrupt and borrowed money to support him, and the child was very sensible.
Tang Zhun fabricated the bridge passage himself, coupled with enough writing skills to write vividly and warmly, and now I hear Zhao Zhiyuan boasting?
Said he was a big man who cried when he saw it?
Tang Zhun was a little embarrassed and embarrassed.
"Don't tease me, Brother Zhao, hurry up and give some real advice."
Zhao Zhiyuan replied again, "I didn't tease you, the sixth birthday highlight the warmth of father and son, it's normal for me to cry as a father, if my child has half of Xiaohang in Jiangxia's past, I am willing to make a fussy city." ” "Ha, let's not talk about this, your whole book is very good, although there is still room for improvement in writing skills, not first-class, but the ability to attract people is enough, and then the whole story is too burning, after the initial depression, Lin Kaizhong is optimistic and positive in a small desperate situation, and he can rely on these to achieve success again and again, I am cool to fly, and I can feel touched by warm tears in my heart, in general, in addition to the writing can also improve the writing to write better, the story inspirational reading, are all masterpieces.
The depth is not bad, if we can be as optimistic as the actor, what are we afraid of alive?
” His words really touched me deeply, very deeply, I am at least free and alive, what else do I need to worry about with these two points?
That's right. ” In the book, Lin Kaizhong graduated from junior high school to do masonry work, first built a house in the countryside and then entered the city into the decoration team, construction site, etc., was abandoned by the boss after being almost paralyzed by a work injury, did not pay medical expenses, and when he got better, he took advantage of the previous contacts to pull up the team, taking advantage of the great development trend of Jiangxia, after various hard work, he received the first nine-storey tube building in the urban village and began to start.
In the later period, he began to contract the construction of the community, and then was pitted by Tan Yaowei in the Dagao Dynasty, and threw him a tofu scum plus an empty company......
He himself supported his body with liver disease overnight to visit the buyers who paid the deposit and advance payment one by one, sent copies of his ID cards and home addresses one by one to stabilize people's hearts, borrowed debts to tear down and rebuild, and the reputation of the new community construction company exploded again, and embarked on a new career peak, and he also married hand in hand with the red face who has always supported him, and it was his son who took the initiative to help the red face who had a crush on him chase back.
On the whole, this is the whole story of Jiangxia's past.
In the depression of the general environment, such as the warm bridge of celebrating his son's sixth birthday, or encountering small setbacks in the struggle, Lin Kaizhong relied on his own ability and optimism to infect the left and right, and there were more than a dozen places.
However, what Zhao Zhiyuan said that touched him was really said by Lin Kaizhong himself.
"I'll tell you the truth, your pen can catch me as an author, once you put it in, it's easy to be infected and moved, I cried four or five times, sometimes laughing, and my daughter-in-law thought I was nervous."
"Tang Zhun, this book is not suitable for online publication, 90,000 words published separately?
It's too short, if you can make a movie, as long as you can be worthy of the various sensational and inspirational scenes you made, the actors can play well, and the director can shoot well, it is absolutely touching and inspirational!
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