The first chapter may be a little poisonous for someone to read.,I'll make up a setting.,It's just that it wasn't written at the beginning.,In my personal opinion,In the case of having parents.,There's another father and mother.,It's extremely resistant.,Before the world of pirates, the protagonist was an adult.,Although it's a house.,But it's not mentally retarded.,Even a child has an extra father or mother after experiencing the divorce of his parents.,There will be a period of disagreement like that.,Not to mention adults.,Don't approve is don't recognize.,There's no why., The protagonist just treats this so-called parent as a stranger who can be seen every day.
The second, for the otaku, especially the kind of guy who often YY, plus the baptism of the novel, to live an ordinary life in a dangerous world, is very aggrieved, because you don't know when you will be killed, so you will be so excited after getting the golden finger.
Third, I'm just a rookie writer.,Not an all-rounder.,There will definitely be something bug.,Or something unreasonable.,What's the place that makes the big guys unhappy.,The big guys can calmly put forward opinions with me.,I'll also accept it humbly.,For that kind of tone is very impulsive.,Spray it as soon as it comes up.,That's really embarrassing.,I'm backhand a package for you.。
Even when I'm reading other books, if I come across something that I think is problematic, I just weakly say: I think what's wrong here, please don't mind what I don't say, and if I make a mistake, I apologize.
Finally, thank you again to the old brother who voted for my recommendation, the young lady (although there may not be a young lady.
I want to write this novel well, and I want to be able to continue to write it in the future, and I hope to have your support.