"What's going on?"
At the mouth of an alley in Compton's chaotic neighborhood, police cars are parked with annoying sirens.Opening the car door, a pot-bellied white patrol officer stepped out of the car.Reaching out and touching the pistol on his waist, he asked his colleagues who were investigating in the alley."
Nothing."
Hearing the white patrolman's question, the policeman who arrived first shrugged his shoulders, turned his head to look at the frightened few people behind him, and shook his head."
I just ran into a group of drunks who reported false police.""
Yes."
Hearing his colleague's reply, the nervous look on the white policeman's face suddenly relaxed, and while he breathed a sigh of relief, the palm on his waist still did not let go.After all, this is one of the most dangerous areas in Los Angeles and one of the highest police deaths.And they, the police, who actually protect the safety of the citizens, have become the main culprits for everything.Obviously, these policemen are the biggest guarantee for the safety of the entire city.Even if they occasionally shoot at people who commit suicide, spray pepper spray on unarmed children, and selectively enforce the law.But can they be blamed?
They are just trying to make the country safer.......
"You have to believe me, there's really a bar here!"
”Hearing the conversation between the police, Bert, the man with a nose stud, immediately shouted excitedly."
It's true, I'm not lying, in fact I'm not the only one who entered the bar, my friends are just like me......"
"Yes, yes, a bar full of monsters."
Nodding perfunctorily, looking at Bert, who was flushed and full of alcohol in front of him, the patrol officer obviously did not believe what he said."
Halloween has long passed, Mr.
Bert."
After recording the alarm record, the patrolman closed the booklet in his hand, looked up at the wall in the alley again, and saw that there was no bar except for the graffiti, and then said to Bert."
Now, Mr.
Burt has caused an unnecessary waste of human resources to the police, and you need to pay a fine of five hundred dollars for it.""
Fine, why?!""
Everything I said is true, I didn't report false police!"
Hearing that the police believed that he had made a false police report, especially if he had to pay a fine, the expression on Bert's face became even more agitated.To this, however, the police responded with no less skill.In the alley, the two policemen silently glanced at each other, and then at lightning speed, they pulled out their guns, warned, and detained Bert with ease."
The target resisted, and now he has been arrested."
Controlling the emotional Bert, the policeman's gaze swept over the remaining four people in front of him, and he interrogated sternly."
Perhaps, any of you have been to that bar like Mr.
Bert?"
Faced with the oppressive gaze of ......the police and the heavy fine of $500, Cassie and the others quickly shook their heads and denied it."
No, Mr.
Policeman, we've never seen any bars, we've never ......" ......
[plot value]: 3513 And here, just when the nose nail man Bert and others were suffering because of the incident at the bar.On the other side, inside the apartment room.Zhao Yuan looked at the [Plot Value] displayed on the broken panel of the system, but shook his head a little dissatisfied.In general, although the script of "Strange Bar" took Zhao Yuan a lot of thought in terms of scenes, the actual finished product was not as dramatic as he thought before, or because the characters in the script were too scattered, many of the scenes he conceived in his mind were obviously not as expected when turned into real scenes.Even, some of the plot effects are not much different from the Wumao special effects in B-grade films in Zhao Yuan's eyes.If it weren't for the bar scene that cost 1000 [plot value] as a support rendering, the finished product of the entire script might not even meet the most basic requirements."
Sure enough, the common problem of newcomers is to think too much."
Whether it is a new director or a screenwriter, they often give all kinds of disproportionate ideas and meanings to the works in their hands, and the result of this is often to make an otherwise simple story incomprehensible.There is no doubt that Zhao Yuan also fell into such a trap.After evolving the script of "Loop" through the system, I couldn't wait to try a group drama "Strange Bar" that was several times more complex than the previous script.However, compared to those guys who only gain infamy in the end.Zhao Yuan's luck is that his script evolved in the real world through the system, and with the help of the system, even if the whole script story is average, but under the bonus called reality, he still completed his most basic requirements and helped him get enough [plot value]."
Perhaps, I should try to create a story that I am familiar with, that exists in the real world, rather than a script that I made up out of thin air."
His eyes fell on the [Plot Value] of the broken panel of the system, and Zhao Yuan thought silently.After a few seconds, reining his thoughts, he turned his gaze back to another page of the panel.Reflection is reflection, and the operation that should be carried out must not be forgotten.After all, whether you are satisfied or not, the script of "Strange Bar" has ended its evolution, and instead of caring about the unsatisfactory parts of the script, it is better to see if the system converts some of the items in the script as redeemable goods.......
[System......
Backstage History......
Recording...... ¥ to ......
Swap ......]
[Scenario 2]: "Strange Bar" [World Evolution Rate]: 002 [Plot Item - Inferior Eternal Wine] (300/exchange) [Effect: Eternal Life] [Introduction: This is a cup of inferior Eternal Wine, drink it and you will gain a faint vitality. 】[Note 1: Trust me, you don't want to know what exactly was added to the materials used to make it!]
】[Note 2: Eternal life is not a blessing, but a cruel curse.] 】......
[Story Scene Card - Burning Bones Bar (2/2)] (500) [Card Level: Black Iron] [Introduction: You can insert scenes from the card into a script at will, without consuming excess [Story Points] points. 】[Notes: This is a quirky bar, and the owner of the bar seems to be hiding some kind of secret that no one knows.] 】