Alas.Given that there seem to be a lot of people who hate this book, I didn't want to write any closing remarks to find scolding; But after all, there are readers who like this book, and there are readers who have liked this book, so let's give a little testimonials at the end, which can be regarded as an explanation for this three-million-word journey.Let's take a small tidbit as an introduction - a year and eight months ago, probably around the time I uploaded the first chapter of this book, a pirate author who did not want to be named, Happy Luo, said: You write later to remind me when you get on the boat, I'll go to your book review area to see the excitement.So let's start the first and only and last SBS of the book!
D: (Applause) (applause), by your accent, it means that when you wrote the first chapter, you decided that the book was a "boat flow"?
Y：？
D：？
Y: Your question, reminds me of a little tidbit......
D: Why do you have so many tidbits?
Y: Almost at the beginning of the 100th chapter of this book, when Lynch and Robin passed by Trap Island, Shemale Island, and Boeing Islands one after another, I forgot where I saw a comment, which roughly meant: How does this protagonist keep running to the island of the plot in the past two years, does he have to follow the boat?
D：…… So?
Y: I mean, if you look at it from the back, the smell of the book is actually very obvious.Otherwise, why does the protagonist enter the Great Voyage for the first time, but he passes by those islands related to the Straw Hat's doubts?
Why does the protagonist hardly call himself a pirate group and never recruit new crew members?
Why do you have to turn around and go to the Nine Snakes?
Why did you go to Chambord when you were there, but you didn't go to Fish-Man Island because of an accident?
And so on (laughs).Y: By the way, chapter 610, the title is "Lao Tzu Don't Be a Hero", and when I wrote that chapter, I felt like I was almost explicit......
The "hero theory" in Lynch's mouth is basically a copy of the similar statements of Luffy and Zoro in the comics.D：？
Let's not talk about what is explicit; Didn't you go to Fish-Man Island, wasn't it to treat Whitebeard?
What does it have to do with getting on board later?
Y: Didn't Whitebeard die at the top of the end after being treated?
D: What do you say......
Y: Treating Whitebeard was just a trick to cover up the fact that I would never let the protagonist and Robin go to Fish-Man Island before they got on the boat.It seems strange to take it out specifically, but there is such a kind of self-restraint when I write it: if I write at that time with a crooked hand and let Lynch and Robin go to Fish-Man Island in advance to "step on it", then I will give up on boarding later.D: It's good to give up, why don't you give up......
Y: Similarly, if you accidentally write that Lynch has put someone other than Robin on the ship, forming a de facto pirate group, then you will also give up following the ship; Even if you accidentally write Lynch in the style of "I'm the captain of the JOJO Pirates", then give up following the ship later; If you accidentally write the first half of the story in the style of "not so much like a pirate manga", then give up following the ship later......
D: You wait.It's written in the style of a pirate manga, but it's actually intentional?
Y: So what's not the case?
In fact, there are special things that make Lynch do something that earthlings won't do but people who put it on a straw hat boat, and I have a deep impression that in the early stage in the West Sea, Lynch would deliberately play with fire when facing the muzzle of the gun; robbed Caesar directly on the flower boat; When fighting Heina on Kraikana Island, in the face of the enemy's strange abilities, he will not go to the "thinking cycle" and do "perfect measures......
To put it bluntly, he deliberately made him "indecent" and "brainless".Lynch's style of speech and behavior is not too far away from the route of the protagonist of the online article, and also tries to fit the atmosphere of the Straw Hats as much as possible.D: If you say that, in the first chapter, Lynch will have that kind of "death-seeking" reaction when facing the gangsters......
Y: I deliberately wrote that way (laughs) to highlight a brain with a bag.D: Also, Lynch is sometimes referred to as a benevolent pirate, as there is very little written about how he slaughters trash fish......
Y: If it's too bloody, and it depicts how many people Lynch killed, it always feels like it doesn't fit the style of the straw hat.So yes, the depiction of murder was deliberately avoided – just like in the comics.D: I suddenly feel so bored......
Y: (laughs) You have to talk about it from a writing perspective.Writing is inherently boring, especially when you already have the overall outline of the whole book at the beginning of writing, which is even more boring.But in the context of the story itself, when did Lynch himself decide to get on the boat?
It was the end of the battle on the top.For Lynch at the time, not being able to get on the boat didn't have much impact on him, and he didn't mind it very much, plus Luffy's insistence, so it was natural to get on - at least the effect I hoped to achieve.D: It doesn't have that effect.Y: Seems so.D: So back to the beginning – why follow the boat?
It's too old-fashioned, what's there to keep up with that rotten ship of the Straw Hats?
Y: I also hate the New World chapter, especially Luffy after the Big Mom chapter, or even the whole Straw Hats.I don't feel like I used to have the same flavor as before.D：？
Y: That's why you miss the Straw Hats in the first half of the game even more, don't you?
If we divide the Straw Hats in the first half and the Straw Hats in the second half into Straw Hats A and Straw Hats B, then I think the reason why I wanted to write about the boat is that I think that there are some things in the story of Straw Hat A that would be better if they could be done (such as leaving Merry and bringing Rab), and the terrible and unlikable story of Straw Hat B can only be understood if it doesn't happen at all, or if Straw Hat A replaces it......
For example, it was to make Luffy say to Xiaoyu that her abilities were annoying, and to make Luffy say that Ota was too naïve, so that he didn't write uncomfortable......
D: Okay, okay, "for this bit of vinegar, wrapped this dumpling", with a rotten stalk, it belongs to the ......
D: You haven't answered the previous question: why follow the boat?
Do you have any fetishes?
Y: Actually, I don't see much pirate fandom.Hokage has read the most and has written it himself; Dragon Ball fandom favorites, but I don't read much (because there are fewer people who write about it), and I have written it myself, and I have written two books; Pirate fandom......
The ones that can still remember me are "Pirate no I am a Demon", and the other is "One Piece: The Legend of the Mage......
Unfortunately (laughs), both of these books are so-called "following the boat flow", especially the latter, and the protagonist of the latter is also the mode of taking risks first and then getting on the boat.D：…… What are these two books dug up from the ancient tomb?
Y: So I don't see much.In addition, I have never written pirate writing, so this is the first time I try it, so why not write about the genre that I prefer?
D: Oh.So write with the boat.Oh.Y: When I decided to write about the flow of the boat, I ran into a tricky problem.D: Is this something that no one likes to watch at all?
Y: Personally, I don't really like the nanny style of the main character.Although the above I am a demon and a mage legend, especially a mage legend, it is a bit of a nanny......
On the other hand, other pirate texts, even if they don't follow the boat flow, sometimes when they meet the characters in the plot, they obviously have nothing to do with the protagonist, and the protagonist will still go all the way and take the initiative to pay without asking for anything in return, which is actually quite annoying.D: Didn't you fucking say that you read very few pirate texts?
Y: It's a lot, but it's not like I haven't seen it.A lot of them just glanced at them casually, and if they didn't like it, they threw it away, so they didn't leave any impression in their minds.Y: Since I don't like the main character who does this, I try to avoid similar feelings when I write.Take the plot in this book as an example, the design that I am more proud of personally has to count the arrangement of Momonosuke in the Wano Country chapter - Lynch subjectively didn't think about deliberately targeting Momonosuke as a little kid, but Momonosuke will end up like that, and it is closely related to the incident when Lynch killed Doflamingo in the first place.To sum up, I just like the feeling that no matter how much I want something to happen, if it's not very suitable for the protagonist to do, then I don't force the protagonist to do it himself.Y: For example, the plot of Cap in Windmill Village and Shanks and them going to meet Ace.Of course, this is a plot that I deliberately wrote, but on the surface, it doesn't seem to have anything to do with Lynch.But if it weren't for Lynch, Tulip wouldn't have gone to Windmill Village alive, and if it weren't for Tulip, Karp wouldn't have returned to his hometown in the East China Sea ahead of schedule, and he wouldn't have met Shanks who hadn't had time to leave.Now that Karp has met Shanks, the rest of the matter is logical......
D: Isn't it talking about the boat with so much hammering?
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Y: Since I don't like the nanny-style protagonist, the first plan to kill is to follow the boat from the beginning of the story.From the very beginning, I followed the boat, and it seemed that it was a bit difficult to write one or two million words, and it seemed that it was a bit difficult not to babysit.Y: On the other hand, this way of following the ship at the beginning, there will be a difficult problem to deal with: is the boss you encounter for Luffy or for the protagonist?
Give Luffy a fight, so why did the protagonist come?
Hit the protagonist, the limelight and experience are given to the protagonist, why did Luffy come?
- And if you choose to follow the ship, it's obviously out of liking the Straw Hats, and in turn, you want the same protagonist to grab Luffy's boss and experience pack, and grab the limelight and the highlight moment, which seems to put the cart before the horse.D：…… D: So that's why people don't like to follow the boat and don't like to write about the boat flow, don't you see?
This theme is inherently deformed in online articles!
Y: You can't just give up when you have a problem, right?
Think again.Then it's time to consider another question: the protagonist wants to get on the boat, and when he gets on the ship, what range should his strength be positioned?
When the protagonist gets on the ship, the strength is less than or equal to Luffy Zoro's, then obviously this is a way to grow together - but this will lead to, if the protagonist grows at a speed that is not as fast as Luso, it will seem a little wasteful, and the strength is not as good, then obviously the quality of the monster on the road is not as good as Luso, and the highlight moments and bosses will be given to Luffy, although I personally don't think there is anything, but I want to know that it is definitely not suitable for the reading habits of online texts; And if the protagonist's growth rate exceeds Luso's, this is even more nonsense, in this case, what is the meaning of Luso's existence?
The characteristics of Luffy Zoro are in battle, and the characters who lose their characteristics are boring......
D: You're saying this as if Lynch isn't as strong as Luso......
Y: When you go beyond too much, it doesn't affect you (laughs), and it is based on this view that the current plot line is finally finalized: the first half is the protagonist's own adventure, and the middle part is officially on the ship after the battle on the top, and the protagonist only participates in the flow of the new world in the second half.D: I have amnesia?
How do I remember that the first half was also written?
Y: I really want to write about it.also said in the listing testimonial, how could Mei Li just give up???
Y: But this also brings up another new problem: since the protagonist has officially boarded the ship after the decision has been made, it is obvious that the protagonist's strength is already in the first echelon at that time, but the first half of the story has to be written, so will the protagonist get on the ship before the new world chapter, or the first half of the ship?
If it's the latter, the protagonist's nanny seems to be a certainty......
D: Isn't Lynch a nanny now?
Directly promoted Luffy and his group to the full level on the spot, which is not a nanny......
Y: If you take a closer look, isn't it because Lynch doesn't want to be a babysitter and thinks that it won't be interesting, so it takes a year to get everyone to the full level?
D：？
Y：？
Y: (laughs) It's because Lynch is so strong that he has more than enough to give Luffy all the bosses in the second half of the game, and because Luffy has been directly promoted to the full level, he doesn't need Lynch to intervene to help farm the boss.D: Give up all the bosses in the second half of the game......
Isn't there just one Kaido?
Oh, and a blackbeard.Aunt and Dover have already been booked, Caesar on the Island of Ice and Fire is gone, Dressrosa is gone, and Zou Island is not there......
Y: It was precisely because I knew that the Straw Hats would not go to Zou in the future, so Lynch and Robin went ahead of time and got redstone; It was precisely because he didn't want to write the Tokushima chapter that Lynch solved Tokushima's hidden dangers in advance and went to the North Sea to kill Doflamingo......
This is actually a bit like the type of "nothing to do" I said above, but after all, it's not about helping the plot characters for free, it's about stepping on a ......
So it feels okay.The former gives benefits to the protagonist in pure white, and the latter can still gain some combat experience and the like.Y: Back to the topic.Now there is such a situation in front of us: when the New World chapter is on the ship, the strength of the protagonist must be particularly strong, preferably strong to the point of transcendence; I really wanted to write the first half of the story, but to be honest, I had a good impression of the first half of the story, and I didn't feel the need to make a huge change—but I didn't need to change it, but I needed a reason.My first reaction was: Wouldn't it be nice to let the protagonist have a reason why he can't just shoot casually!
D：…… Waiting here?
So the reason why "B.I.B" has a setting of "the longer you leave the body, the more fatigue you accumulate", is completely designed for getting on board?
Y: Let's split the main character into two people!
It's that simple idea.So to write like this, the other protagonist must be temporarily offline, otherwise there is no reason not to find a way to solve the reason why he can't shoot casually, and stay on the boat honestly......
At that time, I happened to be watching the animation golden wind of the fifth part of JOJO, and I thought that the stand-in thing was very suitable for this idea, so I used it.Y: Why did you stay at Nine Snakes for so long?
Because I want the protagonist and Robin to "get married" with Luffy, I hope it can reduce the discomfort of getting on the ship a little later; Why did you run into Robin at the beginning of the game, and only had Robin as a companion for a long time?
In fact, it was to pave the way for the mid-term protagonist's disconnection, and the original plan was to attract the pursuit of the world government because of Robin's identity being exposed......
However, it seems that this point is not convincing enough, and there is no way to make the protagonist drop, so Imu has to be introduced in advance.Lynch is a fan of Robin in the setting.,I'm sorry I'm not.,I like the beautiful characters in the pirates.,But it's a pity that in the plot arrangement of this book.,The heroine at the beginning can only choose one from Robin and Nami.,Nami is obviously not as suitable as Robin.。
It was actually an accident that the empress became the second heroine......
When I wrote about the Nine Snakes, I suddenly remembered this incident.Because of the heartthrob setting of the empress herself, I persuaded myself to let Lynch, who didn't have the mentality of opening a harem, hug left and right.Because only the exceptional empress has a slight possibility for Robin to accept it, other female characters, such as Hayna, Ayu, Nami, and Shirahoshi......
No matter how much I think about it, I have to forget it.D：…… I haven't recovered from the sentence that I have to let the protagonist go offline.D: Speaking of which, do you have a habit of abusing the master?
The last book was abused, and this one is coming again, is it endless?
Y: All I can say about this is that I couldn't stand it myself in the early stages of the previous book......
The words of this book, like a lot of explanations mentioned above, are not aimed at abusing the master, but to make Lynch's body offline.I also had as much moisturizing as possible during the period when I let Lynch drop the connection......
D: One of Robin's only two character labels is "Nicole Robin's Autistic Ten Years", which you call moisturizing......
Y: I can only make her shut up.Do you want to write it like this: The protagonist is in prison here, and the heroine is playing happily outside......
This is actually the reason why Robin was chosen at the beginning.To put it mildly, the character Robin himself has autistic genes in the comics, so it is not inconsistent to write at this time.It's for the same reason that I think that plot must also be developed from Robin's main point of view......
If you put the perspective on Lynch's side, after squatting in prison for ten years, you can look up and see that my wife has come to find me with a group of people.It's a bit strange.Given that there are even people who angrily squirt out such incomprehensible arguments as "green hat" and "wife" after writing like this, I really can't imagine what it would be like to skip Robin's perspective and write only Lynch......
D: In short, in a word: you want to write with the boat, and now this is the only way you can think of and are willing to write with the boat, right?
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Y: Pretty much.D: In that case, why didn't you indicate in the introduction that it was a boat flow?
Y: In that case, there will inevitably be such a scene: if you want to see the boat, you come in and take a look at the introduction, and you read tens of thousands of words, hundreds of thousands of words, hundreds of thousands of words, why the hell hasn't followed the boat, and you are in a hurry to die?
On the other hand, I also have this idea after all: as long as I try to write the atmosphere of the first half of the story in a more comic style and a little more "straw hat", it may not be easier for people to accept it when they see the second half of the story......
Take 10,000 steps back and say, even from a utilitarian point of view, if you mark the flow of the boat in the introduction, maybe some people will coax "It's boring, anyway, the back is to follow the boat, and the better the front looks, the more boring", if I receive such feedback all day long, I doubt that I can finish this book.D: Isn't that a good thing to say, just trying to trick more people into coming in?
Y: If you want to say that, you can do that.Here's an apology to readers who can't accept it even if they see it and are "hurt".I don't really mean it subjectively.,And I'm a little helpless about the fact that it's obviously a One Piece fandom who wants to use elements such as "following the boat" and "leaning towards the straw hat" as stinky shit that you can't avoid.
、I need to be specially marked with prior warning......
One thing to say, this book was written, and I was quite bored with the One Piece theme......
D: You won't write pirate essays in the future?
Y: I will write two more.D：？
Y: (laughs) This was an idea that came up when I was upset in the second half of this book.,Divide the other two fanfiction stories at different points in time when Lily Lynch is born.,The general direction of the two books and the end of the book are almost considered without paying attention.,It seems a bit of a pity if I didn't write it.。
In particular, the title and introduction of one of the volumes have been finalized, ["Commodore Chirin, may I ask why you chose such a remote South China Sea branch instead of the naval headquarters in Marin Fando?
I think everyone knows that with your talent, you can easily pass Marin Vanderdo's enlistment test. ”"Because it's closer to home." 】, even if it's just for the sake of this introduction, I want to make it out.Y: But I don't think I'll write it in the next book.Because it's said that I'm bored with the pirate theme, it's sincere......
Take a slow breath first.Y: As for the third book of pirates, I decided to wait until Oda finished drawing One Piece and the manga story was settled.D: You're thinking a lot.Well, there are so many testimonials written, it should be enough to rush the word count of this book to three million, anyway, there is no charge for testimonials, no need to water anymore.That's it, let's make a final summary!
Y: (laughs) According to the established outline, I didn't deviate from the track, and I finished writing one smoothly, which is different from the previous experience of writing blindly like a foolish fly (especially after beating Hayna, at that time, I completely perfected the follow-up outline, so after that, the speed of updating was also stable and fast), in short, I am very happy to finish the book.D: What else?
Y: What a genius idea to serialize at the head of the chapter!
Next door, Luo said that the number of water words with this thing is particularly easy to use!
The chapter head darkness in the top battle part is my favorite one, and the chapter head serialization and the text are perfectly synchronized, which is amazing!
D: What else?
Y: Follow the boat flow, stupid to write.I'm a fool!
D：…… Y: It's great that the first pirate book was written about the flow of the boat.See you next book!