Brothers and sisters, the author Jun is back~ Because of the previous Chinese New Year, I didn't rush to write the testimonial after the gene was finished, and now I am making up for it.Let's talk about the results first.,The first order of the gene is about 1080,To the end of the book 1.5 million words,Just now the author Jun went to look at the backstage,The average order is 6840,The average order is seven times faster than the first order,This is already very good.,Of course,Overall, it's a little worse than hunting and luck lines.,But the author also knows that this book is not very good.,To have such a result,It's also thanks to everyone's like.。
Let's talk about the content again, when I was writing the luck line, there was just a contract turmoil at that time, plus the author Jun was chasing the book at that time, and his mentality also collapsed, and then it slowed down for a while, and he hadn't been writing a book for a long time.The biggest drawback is that even the strength system is not polished very well.There are too many categories of the qualities of the transcendent genes and the qualities of the genetic warriors, which leads to some confusion, and the protagonist's start is very weak, which makes people feel like they are suppressing the protagonist.Of course, friends who have watched the author Jun's hunting should know that the author Jun is a typical cool author, who will not be literary and young, nor will he suppress the protagonist, so it can only be said that the handling is not good enough.In addition to the core power system, there are also certain problems with the worldview, the cost of death in the Land of Origin is too small, the lack of urgency, and the process of switching between the Land of Origin and the real world will also cause a certain sense of separation.Moreover, the author Jun spent a lot of time laying the groundwork for the Soul Devouring Bead in the early stage, which was too slow, which was one of the reasons why the friends felt a little suppressed by the protagonist.In addition,There's also the problem of the protagonist's emotional line.,The author didn't handle it well.,It's too sloppy.,There's still a big gap between the individual and the hunt.,Later,The number of heroines is too much.,In order not to drag the rhythm.,Don't affect the main line.,I had to close it as soon as possible.,This doesn't feel very good.,The next book will be improved.。
Of course,Compared with hunting and luck line,The author thinks there is still a better place.,In the control of the main line,The author thinks it's better than before.,It's just that the main line of genes is short.,So it's not as long as hunting.。
In this regard, I hope to continue to maintain this point in the next book and strive for breakthroughs.After reviewing yourself, it's time to talk about the new book.Now the author Jun is preparing a new book, the specific opening time, should be the second half of this month, around the 20th, probably, after the opening of the book, the author Jun will say ~ the next book, the author Jun will prepare well, I hope to make progress ~ I also hope that the brothers and sisters who like the author Jun will continue to support ~ ~ Finally, the new year is coming, I wish you all all the best in the new year~