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）First of all, I would like to thank all the book friends for their support all the way, and I wish you all the best in the new year.Secondly, the ending is a bit rushed, and there are many unsatisfactory places, so I apologize to everyone.I may write a few simple free small theaters later.,If you have a plot you want to see, you can put it forward in this chapter.。
What follows is a review and summary of the book.This book is a bit bumpy to write now, the data of the new book period is very poor, 100,000 words and 100 collections, 140,000 are eligible to test the waters.In general, most people in this situation cut directly without any hesitation.The author's friends also suggested that Erhu cut the new book, but Erhu still chose to insist on reading it.Thanks to the persistence at the beginning, this book has been written to the present.Although the data is not very good, but I personally like this book, I often turn it out to read it during the serialization, and I unconsciously smile on my face, and I read many chapters unconsciously, and time has passed, so I have delayed several updates for this reason......
Getting back to the point, the results have improved a little after testing the waters, although it is still not very good, but it has also met the expectations of the two tigers, and all the persistence and efforts have not been in vain.After the new book issue is recommended, it will be put on the shelves.In the six months since it was put on the shelves, it has risen from 630+ on the first day to 2700 now, more than quadrupled, and the increase is quite qualified.But it's a bit of a pity that it's still 300 miles away from the boutique......
As a street fighter, I really dream of entering the boutique (broken sound)......
Here, I strongly urge readers who read this book on other platforms to try to read from the starting point and subscribe to support the author......
Readers' subscription is the author's biggest creative motivation, I sincerely thank the brothers who have been subscribed, thank you, Erhu bows to everyone, and performs a split for everyone!
The next step is to review, summarize the obvious deficiencies in the creation process, record them, and give them a reminder to yourself in the future, hoping that the mistakes you have made will not be made again, and you will write better works.
(Tips: The following content has more serious spoilers, friends who haven't finished reading the novel can skip this summary) In the process of serialization, there have been two chasing big faults, and half of them collapsed directly, which is very scary.The first time was that Erhu felt that the previous plot was too bland, and then forcibly wrote a villain, that is, Yang Yi, after entering the secret realm, to increase the conflict.As soon as this plot came out, half of the follow-up was dropped the next day, and Erhu's heart was half cold at that time......
After reflection, I found that the reason why this is the case is mainly because the style before and after is too different, forming a serious sense of separation.Before this plot, the style of this book has always been a light-hearted and pleasant daily style, there is no bitterness and hatred, and there is no villain who targets the protagonist everywhere and is slapped in the face by the protagonist or something.The previous article was written all the way, and it also built such a relatively harmonious atmosphere within the human race and a strong external atmosphere.Although the rhythm is bland, at least it is relaxed and pleasant to watch.But at this time, a villain who seemed to have a problem with his brain (reducing intelligence) suddenly appeared, and he began to be hostile in a few words, and even wanted to kill the protagonist who was already a core genius disciple, and the painting style was cut off at once, and the readers who couldn't bear it naturally ran away.Later, after reflection, the two tigers revised the conflict to soften a little, and the downward range was slightly better.But the plot has already been written, and it can't be drastically deleted, and it can only continue to be written like this.At that time, not long after it was put on the shelves, about 300,000 words, the book experienced a crash, and it can only be said that Erhu is too vegetable......
After that, the author maintained the original style, and the follow-up has been relatively stable, until 600,000 words.And then 600,000 here, there was a second subscription crash, the same kind that was cut in half.The reason for the collapse is also very simple, that is, to determine the identity of the heroine.Because of the subject matter, one of the biggest expectations of this book is the identity of the heroine, and everyone is curious about who the child's mother is.As soon as the answer was announced, most readers instantly felt bored and had no desire to continue reading.For such an expectation point, the conventional way to deal with it is to keep pulling, keeping the identity of the heroine mysterious, and not determining the identity of the heroine until the finale, no matter how much the reader urges, the answer will not be announced.But the two tigers ......
Forget it, it's all tears.I don't want to do this kind of plot setting.,I'm too soft-hearted.,Seeing that everyone is asking.,I wrote it directly as soon as my mind was hot...The advice of the editor at the time was to revise the chapter, not to reveal the identity of the heroine, and to pull the readers who came in later.But at that time, there were already 1400+ subscriptions, and these more than 1400 readers had already read that chapter, after such an important plot overhaul, what should these more than 1400 readers do?
Wouldn't it be confusing to see the relevant plot nodes in the future?
Considering this,Erhu didn't change it much.,It's just a blur.,Although the identity of the heroine is not directly clarified.,But after reading that chapter,,Who the heroine is is basically clear.,In this way, it won't affect the readers who have read it too much.。
But obviously, such a change is equivalent to covering your ears and stealing the bell, which has no effect, and the proportion of subsequent post-subscription has not increased.And because of this plot, I won't write much about the emotional line in the future, and I will try my best to write the upgrade line, and once again I will lose readers who like to read the emotional line.At this point, the chase has been sluggish, and the average order is also a mess, and it has even been falling for a while, dropping 300 average orders in a month, and the data has fallen rapidly.It was a very painful time to write, the creative passion declined, and the updates gradually decreased......
It wasn't until last month that the Huya editor helped arrange a big recommendation, and the order was pulled back again, and it rose a little bit more.If there are no these two crashes, you can make more good recommendations, and the average order should be doubled so far......
But there are no ifs in reality, we can only learn lessons and continue to work hard in the future.Finally, there are some problems in the conventional way of writing, such as improper detailing, water where it should not be water, and where it should be detailed but not detailed enough, in general, the rhythm is not good, which is also a common problem for our kind of cover writers.Then there is the fact that the plot is too bland, there is no conflict from beginning to end, and the protagonist has no clear opponents.As a fantasy novel, the plot is definitely too bland, and the reader's stickiness will be very low, which is also one of the important reasons why the new book period can't test the waters, and the follow-up is mediocre after it is put on the shelves.But the level of the two tigers' writing conflicts seems to be a bit poor - but I will pay more attention in the next book, and try to improve this aspect as much as possible.To sum it up, that's pretty much it.Finally, let's talk about the situation of the new book, the theme of the new book has been determined, it is still fantasy, but the background will not be written in modern times.When the book was opened......
Erhu wants to rest for a while.,Adjust the work and rest of the underworld.,The new book will probably be opened after the Spring Festival.,A single chapter will be sent then.,Remember to go over and see if you're interested.,Pull a little bit to read something.,Rush the data.。
During this period,There will be a little bit of an update.,You can also pay attention to it.,If you want to see a small plot that you want to see, you can also talk about it here.,The author will refer to it.。
There is no feast in the world, and this is really the end, thank you for your support along the way, and thank you to every reader who feeds subscriptions, monthly passes, rewards, and recommended votes.Here, I would like to thank the [Qin Shihuang Q] boss for his monthly ticket support, I am very impressed with him, because he votes for the most monthly tickets every month......
There is also the big guy of [Don't Wave], for a period of time this chapter said that it was all about him to live, and he was cheering me on every day, which made me full of motivation.There are some other familiar IDs that are not listed here.———— Erhu paused, January 7, 2023.