The appearance of the warrior path Lin Yu made a great change in the atmosphere of the scene, and this was of course a good thing for Gu Wu.
However, her appearance also delayed Gu Wu's plan a little, after all, whether it was Xia Zhiqiu or Yingli Li, they all seemed to like this well-behaved little guy very much.
After about twenty minutes, after singing, drinking, and reading more than ten minutes of comics, even Ringo, who was in high spirits at first, became sleepy by this time.
The little girl who yawned ran to the corner of the sofa to sleep under Gu Wu's reminder, where the armrests could be used as pillows; In order not to let her catch a cold, Gu Wu also specially asked the store to borrow a blanket.
Retracting his gaze from Ringo, who had already fallen asleep, Kasumigaoka, who had placed the microphone and comic book neatly in place, continued the original topic.
"Mr.
Gu Wu, are you the kind of person who marries your son?"
probably felt that this kind of topic was a little inappropriate in front of children, so Xia Zhiqiu waited until now, and Gu Wu, who was asked, immediately shook his head in denial.
"What are you talking about, this girl is the granddaughter of my mother-in-law, the landlord of my rental house, and because she wants to participate in the town's association, she handed over Ringo, whose parents are both on overseas business trips, to me to take care of for a day, so you understand?"
"That landlady's mother-in-law has a really big heart, and she actually handed over her granddaughter to Mr.
Gu Wu, could it be that Mr.
Gu Wu is a sunny and good person in the apartment where he lives?"
"As Sawamura-san said, I've always been the kind of sunny and good person."
In the face of Ying Lili's ridicule, Gu Wu put gold on his face in an indifferent tone.
There is no way, the current Gu Wu, whether in the eyes of Xia Zhiqiu or in the eyes of Ying Lili, is a bit like a wall grass, and he has no intention of helping both sides.
However, in fact, Gu Wu has always been very serious, and Gu Wu has all done a review of the short story solicitation of Xiazhiqiu and the painting technique of Yingli Li, and listed some of the things they need to pay attention to.
Although Gu Wu is not a professional judge, he still has some vision after reading countless books, coupled with the guidance of teachers in the industry, Gu Wu's level is steadily rising.
"Since Lin Yi-chan has been asleep, let's discuss it quietly, Mr.
Gu Wu can take a look at the manuscript I wrote first."
"No problem, can Sawamura-san wait a minute?"
Ying Lili, who was at the back of the line, didn't say much, she was more concerned about the results of the rally than the order.
Taking the laptop handed to him by Kasumigaoka, Gu Wu, who had already switched to the reading program, began to read quickly, which can be regarded as a basic skill that editors need.
Especially when the library held a contest, thousands of manuscripts were reviewed by more than a dozen editors, and even had to be read twice, so the workload can be imagined.
His eyes kept scanning the words on the screen, and the plot that was not much different from Gu Wu's impression was compressed, but fortunately, the wonderful places were perfectly preserved by Xia Zhiqiu.
"The first half is fine, but the second half is about the conflict between the protagonists, I think it can be appropriately lengthened."
"However, there is a limit to the number of words, and if you continue to lengthen it, it means that you must write it completely, and the result of writing it completely is beyond the range of words."
"Yes, so at this time, let's integrate the plot of the first half first."
Short stories need to be short and concise, and the climax is of course the best choice, but if the real excitement is the same as the other parts, it loses its meaning of existence.
Gu Wu doesn't like to pick bones in eggs, and he has only one idea at present, hoping that Xia Zhiqiu will win the gold award in this call for submissions and win the first place.
"Then we have to try it, what are the other problems?
Personally, I've seen it myself, and the degree of completion is still very high in my heart. ” "Well, the level of completion is indeed very high, and the details of the bugs have been fixed, I think we just need to focus on the most exciting parts to rectify them."
Speaking of this, Gu Wu transmitted the information saved in his mobile phone to Kasumigaoka.
"Your work will get comments from readers as well as Ahn Yijun, right?
They certainly have very good advice, but it's still a bit of a gap compared to professional teachers, and the message I just sent you is a rough evaluation of your work from a 20-year editor. ” Even if it is a rough evaluation, the old editor, who has read more books than Gu Wu has eaten, will definitely give some very incisive opinions.
"Trouble Mr.
Gu Wu, is it okay to ask for such an editor?
He must have a lot of work, right?
” In general, editors with deep qualifications have produced many excellent writers, so it is normal for them to be busy.
Xia Zhiqiu's concern was not unreasonable, as for Gu Wu's answer.
"Don't worry, I've been mixing pretty well lately."
"Please don't say such perfunctory things."
"All in all, let's get the job done first."
Unwilling to continue on this topic, Gu Wu said that the current Kasumigaoka should devote himself to work.
Immediately afterwards, Gu Wu took out a document from his arms, which was just enough to be placed in his jacket pocket after being folded in half once.
When you open it, you can see an original drawing, a beautiful girl in a swimsuit is posing for a photo, and there are several passers-by looking at the girl in the painting.
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Some places on the sketch have been marked with red pen, and the curves of the characters have been slightly modified to make the whole work look more perfect.
"Isn't this my painting?"
"I printed out the drawings submitted by Sawamura-san, and there is an illustration teacher named Yukumiko Kotori in the Immortal River Bookstore."
"That Totori-sensei who is in charge of many animations?!"
"I think so."
Gu Wu is not very familiar with the popular works in this world, and he thinks that he should investigate it well next time.
"This is her change to your work, and some annotations, I thought I could help you."
"Great help!
I see, the perspective of the characters in this kind of scene has to take into account the distance of the standing!
” With an excited face, Ying Lili picked up her corrected painting and looked at it, and noticed that there were children sleeping, and she quickly quieted down.
Kasumigaoka, who was planning to revise the outline, stopped the slender fingers that were jumping on the keyboard and said in a helpless tone.
"Sure enough, some of them are children, can you please be quiet?"
"Who are you talking about?"
"Look, I don't have anyone to say, but in every aspect, he's a child."
"Kasumigaoka Shiha!
You really want to quarrel!?
” For some reason, the two heroines who suddenly argued had no idea of giving in.
Is this a special kind of Shura field?
Gu Wu couldn't help but have such thoughts......
It's just that this scene is probably normal for An Yilun.
"You don't have to argue about me."
"It's not for you!
x2”” Answers in unison?!
It's a bit of a blow!
"In the final analysis, for Mr.
Gu Wu, your painting is just incidental."
"yes, I'm not going to keep begging people to help me."
Ying Lili, who took a counterattack, was very problematic in her speech, and it was she who took the initiative to find Gu Wu in the first place.
Hawkers~ What kind of answer will the tsundere girl make, Gu Wu is still very clear in his heart, just put his mind and find a way to carry the audience!
The interaction between the three of them woke up Ringo, who was supposed to be asleep in a dream, and the little girl who rubbed her eyes looked at Yingli and Kasumigaoka respectively.
"Aren't the two sisters friends?
Why quarrel?
” "Friend, we're not in that kind of intimate relationship."
"That's right, Kasumigaoka Shiyu is not my friend!"
The two protagonists denied.,Then little Lori's answer made them stunned together.。
"But if it weren't for friends, you wouldn't have come here in the first place, would you?"
That's right, if you really hate each other and refuse this rally, just another day, there is no need to be in such a hurry.
But the result?
Kasumigaoka and Eiri pear both appeared here, and even if they were dissatisfied with each other, they still came.
It can be seen that their disgust is not disgust for the enemy, it is a bit like same-sex repulsion.
In the face of a person who has the same idea, there is only one successful person, and the guy who gives in will appear to be timid and incompetent.
"When I was in kindergarten, everyone would also share candy, and my friends who quarreled before will soon reconcile."
Ringo, who took out the toffee from his arms, got up and handed the candies to the two of Kasumigaoka, showing an innocent smile.
Well done!
Gu Wu, who applauded in his heart, thinks that the Lori in front of him is very valuable for cultivation, and she is a genius little girl who deals with interpersonal relationships!
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"Okay, let's get the problem out of what we can handle, what do you think?
I spent a lot of time and energy doing it. ” Gu Wu worked hard for them, and the two heroines who knew this fact did not continue to quarrel, and began to bury their heads in the work in their hands, trying to find a way to solve the trouble they were currently encountering.
It seems that compared to the so-called big truth, the naïve words of the little ghost are more likely to influence the plot.