Smiled and lit a cigarette, looked at the Wenyi Dao Penguin again, compared it with the number in the group, and then began to type.
"Wenda?
I've read [Joke], your book was peaceful at the beginning, and the rebirth essay is easy to write, there are too many things to look forward to, such as rebirth making a movie, the protagonist makes a movie script that will definitely be popular in the future, and it will come out after setting this goal, press it, let him be looked down on in various ways, the script will be rejected, and the reader's sense of expectation will become stronger and stronger when it breaks out. ” "But your text, the flaws are also here, the protagonist is reborn, and he doesn't grasp any content that will be popular that readers will know in the future, and it's as plain as a running account." ………… Huan Ran Xingkong is a senior Xiao Xiaojie, who has been writing books for four years, and the best results are still less than 1,000 subscriptions in 24 hours, and he barely surpluses after feeding on the manuscript fee every month.
What the other authors think of [Joke], he doesn't know, he only knows that he waited for the half-step god to join the battle, and he only read this book seriously.
Reading all the way, Huan Ran Starry Sky also discovered that Wen Yizaidao's writing ability is steadily improving.
The opening is not only a running account, but also has many strange words and sentences, and the writing is not so smooth.
After 20,000 words, the other party used words to form sentences, and the sense of reading experience has been on the right track, forty or fifty thousand words, and his writing style has been improved, which is a little surprising. 100,000 words?
Now the [joke] words are gorgeous, but those words seem to have a kind of magic, will involuntarily attract you, scenes, atmosphere descriptions between the few words, can describe a scene clearly and vividly, when reading the starry sky, more than once is along the text of the mind of the corresponding scene, as if you are in the environment of the book, the sense of substitution is super strong.
If it weren't for the other party's rapid improvement, his impression of this super second generation?
It's still the same as other authors in the group.,The water is gone.,Hug your thighs and so on.。
In addition to the text, the other party is no longer so fluid when writing, there are really ups and downs, and now the biggest problem is, "Wenda, your follow-up skills have also come up, that is, the style is more realistic, and it is too ruthless, Yang, not strong enough, just like the original reader expected that after the protagonist was suppressed by suffering, there would be a volcanic eruption that was proud of all directions, but you had a small fountain, and the difference was too big......"
Different from ordinary irrigation and swiping the screen, the starry sky conveyed his true thoughts to the other party through the Penguin like splashing water at the super hand speed of four years of code words.
Paragraphs of text jumped out, and Tang Zhun on the other side of the computer also looked at it very seriously.
The more he looked at him, sometimes frowning, sometimes smiling.
In the future, the family writes articles, the protagonist suffers a setback, suppression, can't accept decadence for a short time, regains confidence after a while, and then is suppressed, encounters hardships and grinding, and after a while regains confidence, improves through his own efforts, and continues to encounter hardships......
That kind of article is mainly a profound ordeal of reality, polished again and again, and the protagonist's heart rises from the state of ordinary people to indomitable, and the more frustrated he becomes, the more courageous he becomes, until he is fearless.
The whole article will highlight the transformation process of the protagonist's mind, as well as the spirit of never giving up and never giving up throughout the whole article, at this time, into their own Taoist feelings, when the reader sees it, they will feel a little bit positive and fearless bravery, the soul and the protagonist become stronger together, and then experience the baptism of their own state from the Taoist rhyme, so that the soul and body become stronger together in reading.
Tang Zhun, as an old white reader, also knew that this was not suitable for online texts when he was learning to imitate, but he still couldn't help but be affected when he was studying, and he [joked] the protagonist of the book was also pressed too realistically, and it could not reach the coolness expected by online readers.
He frowned, just because he felt that according to the starry sky, the spirit he wanted to embody in the text and the deeper connotation could not be written at all.
With a smile on his face, he realized that he had to stutter the rice in one bite, and the road had to be walked step by step, and now he had not yet realized the slightest rhyme, and his skill and ability were far less than one thousandth of the family, and he went straight to the direction of development such as deep and deep, and the steps were too big.
Can't expect new local tyrant geniuses to appear all day long, and can't expect to make money by tipping?
It's also good to write a good online article to accumulate original wealth.
The more I chatted and thought about it, the more I understood the rhythm and explosiveness of online articles, and Tang Zhun's favorability towards the author of Huan Ran Starry Sky was also improving linearly.
"Kongda, thank you very much, I don't know if you have time, I'm about to reach a new high in the article, I'll try to write it according to the idea you said, and then send it to you?"
After chatting for more than an hour unconsciously, Tang Zhun finally sent a sentence.
Huan Ran Xingkong also replied quickly, "Yes, to be honest, your skills and explosiveness are very insufficient, but the writing is getting better and better, and a few sentences outline the visual impact that comes to the face, and this aspect is already catching up with the real god." ” "Let's just say I, I want to describe a scene in words for several paragraphs, two or three hundred words are not so clear, you two or three crosses can write those accurately, the impression is deeper, and it will definitely get better and better if it continues."
This is a compliment, but Tang Zhun smiled wryly.
Thanks to the starry sky again, Tang Zhun closed the chat window of the Penguin, and started to write along the idea, he was already very tired today, but after chatting with the other party so much, he had new feelings and new ideas, and his brain was active.
Tang Zhun started to code words, Gu Yuanshi was not idle in the starry sky, and stared at the chat window for a while before opening the author group to type.
"Ha, I chatted with Wen Da for more than an hour, and I feel that this person is not as cold as the legend."
"Poof~ Empty God, did you really have a private chat with that thigh?"
"I'm pity, that's the way of the text, when I entered the group, the cute god and the god of asking took the initiative to ignore it."
"I despise you, I don't want to hug your thighs and slap your ass!
Such an opportunity didn't even take me?
” ………… A sentence from the starry sky, several replies immediately exploded, and when someone typed a sentence that the empty god despised you, the follow-up crowd began to copy, paste, and swipe the screen again.
Of course, these words are still in joking mode, and the last sentence didn't even take me with such an opportunity?
Suffice it to say that it's all a joke.
But after a string of swipes on the screen, the starry sky still looks depressed.
"I'm dizzy, I'm not here to slap him, I've really read that book, and I'm still chasing it, just talking about writing."
Huan Ran Xingkong swore that he would chat with Wen Yizai for so long, firstly, to admire the speed of that guy's writing, and secondly, to take the initiative to lower his posture and ask for advice, so that he could flutter on the street.
As soon as these words came out, a funny picture immediately hit the group.
After the image is swiped, it is the new text content.
"Starry sky, don't be funny, are you chasing the [joke] book?
Talking about writing?
Haha, I'm going to laugh. ” "[Joke] a book like that, chasing?
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Xiaobai isn't interested, hmm, Wen Yizai should dive, he shouldn't be able to see this, right?
” "Don't worry, that guy has been in the group for so long, isn't it clear what his personality is?
It must be gone, or is it that sentence, that book can also be followed?
Starry sky, you cow ben. ” "Starry sky, hugging your thighs isn't like that, right, you say chasing it, don't you think it's too numb?"
……………… Rejuvenation Starry Sky is in the half-step vicissitudes of life in the screen of the recommendation, interested in appreciating it from the perspective of a non-reader, for him it does not matter whether the content of the book is wonderful or not, he is more willing to see the improvement speed of the other party's writing ability.
But not everyone will see these improvements.