(ps: Thank you for the reward of the ice and snow uqifang girl, you said you saw the work related?)
Don't lie to yourself, your qualifications have already been checked for you, hey, everything is in plain sight, ice and snow girl. ） More people, or because of the gossip god battle and other [jokes], I can't read a few chapters, and I didn't last until 20,000 words before I retreated, so I don't know the follow-up.
The starry sky is full of books, and too many people can't bear it.
These contents are also very dizzy to watch, and there is even a trace of anger, rubbing, he is really chasing it, why in the hearts of these guys, saying that chasing [joke] has become an undisciplined sycophant?
When he wanted to say anything more, the private chat window popped up, and it was a guy with the online name of Beautiful Man Online.
Huan Ran Xingkong is not very familiar with each other, but he knows that the beautiful man is the same as him online, and he occasionally chats in the group.
"Starry Sky, did you talk to Wen Yidao about chasing his book?
Even if you say that, do you think that they will give you a reward of 10 million?
” The starry sky almost vomited blood.
"Am I that kind of person?
You can go and take a look, the book is not good in the early stage, and his improvement efficiency is very fast in the later stage. ” "Ha, let's have a private chat, and you don't have to be afraid of that guy seeing, what are you pretending, have you asked him what he does in reality, what kind of second generation will attract so many friendship rewards, and even the half-step god has succumbed." “……” After this sentence, the starry sky just replied with a string of ellipses.
I was discussing the issue of writing, how did I become a sycophant in the eyes of so many people, and I had no discipline.
Chasing jokes about that book, is it so obscene?
"I'm really watching."
To reiterate again, the beautiful man replied online and laughed at the network picture, "Funny, I don't want to do business with you, and I can't pull that face anymore." ” The starry sky and face are all black, what does it mean not to rob business, he can't pull down that face?
The two sides were not too familiar with each other, so he directly closed the chat box.
"A group of comics, Wen Yizai is the second generation, but he is now improving his efficiency, if he even makes up for the skills such as wanting to promote and suppress first, even if he can't become a half-step vicissitudes of life, it will not be difficult to become a small fire, relying on the content to become popular, I think who would dare to say that chasing his book is funny, sycophant."
Depressed and scolded, the starry sky also began to code words, he is different from Wen Yizaidao, he is used to staying up late and sleeping after dawn, only coding words at night.
A few hours passed in a flash, and when the starry sky was resting with 5,000 words, the Penguin lit up again, and the text was loaded.
When I opened it, the other party said that I had written 10,000 words?
Looking at it again, he also found that after chatting for more than an hour, the chapters rewritten by Wen Yidao were much more explosive than the previous content, at least he seemed to have read it with a refreshing feeling.
However, this is still far from the real cool text route.
"Rub, a bunch of guys smeared me so much, do you want to use snacks again?
Help him improve more, the faster he improves, the faster I can correct my name. ” What he wants to say is to change the content of this 10,000-word text to carry the Tao.
Speaking and reasoning, the other party understands and accepts slowly, and with factual examples for him to refer to, it will be clearer and more understandable.
It's not a lot of time to revise 10,000 words, he doesn't want to delete and rewrite, but just change the state of the other party when he broke out.
When you really do it, it's almost enough to change two or three thousand words, and for an old man, it's only an hour's thing. ……………… On a new day, Tang Zhun didn't get up until noon, and he was busy and didn't rush to do the guinea pig experiment, he turned on the computer to watch it first.
He's still waiting for the starry sky to give him.
As a result, Tang Zhun was stunned when he saw a document sent by the other party and said that he had helped him revise it.
"So enthusiastic?"
Feeling that the old author was too enthusiastic, he still clicked on the document and watched it.
After reading 10,000 words, most of the starry sky has not moved, only the strength of the explosion at the climax has been moved, which has increased the reaction of many bystanders, exclamations and other modes, and more psychological descriptions will make people more refreshing to read. 10,000 words have been changed to 3,000, and there are parentheses, all of which are about the starry sky explaining why it has been changed so much.
"It's really good from the reader's point of view, it's better than what I started writing, it's ......
It's just not rigorous, the characters' reactions are too exaggerated, and it's not real. ” Tang Zhun's first reaction was that it wasn't real.
But you have to admit that this way will be more enjoyable.
After thinking silently for a while, Tang Zhun began to type again, "Kongda, thank you, you are indeed better looking and more suitable after modification." ” "Wen Da is up?
If you can let go a little, don't pursue rationality so much, deliberately amplify the coolness and write all the way with your writing, I think your book can definitely really become popular. ” "It's also speechless, your 100,000 words, if it's not a little bit of progress, it's a little bit of a show, it's very clear and very tracked, the first 10,000 words of writing power, and the last 10,000 words, it's just two people writing, but you are improving step by step in 100,000 words, and the trajectory is clear."
The starry sky was still asleep, and he quickly replied to Tang Zhun.
Tang Zhun was also stunned, the improvement of words has been an effort all along, and there is still an infinite gap between him and his real home now, but compared to ordinary online writers, is it above the qualified line?
He didn't learn it completely from scratch, he already had memories in his mind, and he couldn't fully grasp it at first, and there was a diaphragm, just like the ability you had already mastered, vaguely with a veil, and if you really practice, it would be much faster than ordinary people who didn't rely on it.
He also had experience in the form of online skills, but when he learned the skills of his family, he was involuntarily affected by the other party's memory.
"Thank you, I understand, and I will work more this in the future."
The meal has to be eaten in one bite, since the other party has helped him so much, he also knows that becoming a family is not achieved overnight, so let's seriously adapt to the rhythm of the Internet first.
The interest of the starry sky also came, "Rebirth text, it is best to write the style and atmosphere of that era, the sense of the era, ordinary authors can't render it without pen power, your pen power is absolutely okay, as long as you can write it, it will attract many readers." ” "Before 100,000 words, you had a strong pen, but you didn't grasp this aspect well, I suggest you can make a small revision." ……………… After a lot of chats and ideas, Tang Zhun was really inspired by this one.
When the starry sky couldn't hold it anymore and went to sleep, he was quite excited and ready to try it as the other party said.
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Before he started writing, Tang Zhun thought about it and clicked on the pages of the starry sky.
"Although this guy is too enthusiastic, he has helped me a lot, and he doesn't say anything."
Tang Zhun didn't have much money in his hand, and it was still possible to recharge a thousand alliance leaders.
Just do it when you think of it, and after recharging, he not only subscribed to a million-word book of Rejuvenation Starry Sky, but also won the alliance leader's reward.
Even if the wealth in his hands shrank a lot again, and he had to save money in the future, Tang Zhun did not hesitate at all.
After doing it, Tang Zhun ignored the other Penguin pop-ups that would be blocked, and reopened his 100,000-word opening chapter with passion and examined it.